|Reviews for If I Had Wings|
| SourTangerine chapter 1 . 6/28/2009
I remember writing a poem about having the wings of a bird and what I would do, but this trumps mine any day. ;)
I love your poetry. It's simple, yet full of emotion and depth.
Keep it up!
| LostInMe chapter 1 . 6/16/2009
Beautiful! The emotions in here are excellent. I like "I'd reach to taste the bluest sky."
Oh, by the way, I don't know if this was a spelling mistake or just a typo, but you wrote "grandure" instead of "grandeur".