Reviews for The Idiocies of a Chocoholic |
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![]() ![]() ![]() SO SAD THAT THIS WILL NEVER BE COMPLETED... UGH! F**K Johnny smith! |
![]() ![]() the female protaganist is pretty cool...when is the next chapter coming up..? |
![]() ![]() Seriously. Can Kaelyn kick the Casey guy in the balls? Or punch him? Or something! Something to put him in his place and make him not a douchebag! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story, I'm really enjoying it so far, but gah I wish that poor Kaelyn would get a break once in a while. When is something good going to happen to her that doesn't involve nasty teachers, stupid a-holes like Casey, and mean fathers/grandmothers? Poor girl. Anyways, I can't wait to see another chapter from you, and I hope we get to see more of Tristan! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey! this is the first time i read your story and it is absolutely wonderful! i love it! i really enjoy Kaelyn's attitude and her conversations with tristan are hilarious! XD now, when will you update the next chapter? i'm really enthralled by story now! so i hope it's soon! btw, if it wasn't clear enough, I LOVE YOUR STORY! a 10 out of 10! |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey! That was an interesting start, I actually enjoyed it even though it was just a setting the scene kind of chapter...But what was a bit of a turn off for me, was that you kept changing between present and past tense... |
![]() ![]() very kawaii the way their flirtin i love how he tries to defend himself all desperate u can tell he "like likes" her lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awww! So cute. Thanks for the update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story but it makes me sad that Kaelyn doesnt have any friends yet. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lol. This story's pretty catchy. I hope you update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome! The first chapter was kind of 'beating around the bush' but the rest is pretty cool. Keep up the good work and plz update soon :) |
![]() ![]() Awesome! Love the story already! |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey, so ive read your original version of this story and i loved it, and im sure ill love the rewrite even more, so pleazzz update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I LOVE YOU! THIS IS AMAZING! |
![]() ![]() she makes friends so fast |