Reviews for Three Aspens |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story! I laugh a lot when I'm reading it! Please update soon! I wan't to know the rest of the story and the REAL reason she hates her father. I'm pretty sure there is something more ~*~HGS~*~ |
![]() ![]() good chapter, i love how she and matt bicker all the time. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow Lol they really get into their arguments don't they? I'd hate to be caught in the middle of that. I really love how the group interacts though. It's fascinating : ) Keep writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I so was not expecting her to talk talke with Arthur and tell him what s wrong. Matt and her bickering is really funny! I can't wait for more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've been following this story on my phone, and I finally got my hands on my computer to write a review. So very sorry for the lateness; I've got loads of things to say. I love the heavy sarcasm and humour contained here-the summary was enough to get me to start reading. You have quite a unique situation here planned-another double plus point~ The story progresses pretty well, too. Your characters are most interesting! For improvements, I haven't found such serious flaws; only some typos (which were made up by the twists in the story, and anyone can make it /shrug). I think I know why Keira hates her father so much and is ther person she is... I'm waiting impatiently for the next chapter, and you can be sure to find my review then. And Keira apologises? (/gasps) Is she even capable of that? That I cannot miss! |
![]() ![]() ![]() So... There's some big mystery as to why she doesn't like people touching her? That's very interesting... That screaming thing was entertaining : ) I think she's in denial |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, that was alot a drama. Now i'm really curious about what her father must have done so hurrible bad. I can't wait to read more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ello! I love this story! Keira reminds me of myself soo much! I seriously feel her annoyance for Matt always butting in and what not. I can't wait to see what happens next! |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a terrible person! I can't bring myself to use the word mother. HA. Very well written, love it! |
![]() ![]() love the story and characters. please update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice |
![]() ![]() ![]() great story ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Keep on Kepin on! ] |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a really funny story! Full of sarcasm and witty remarks. I love how it's written and what it's about. You had a really good idea for it! : ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love her! Just reading this fills me with righteous teenage anger. Rawr. Anyways. It's so good! Continue as quick as possible! |