Reviews for I Now Can See
Said Author chapter 1 . 6/17/2009
Take out the date tag as that kind of takes away from the tone of the poem. Also, instead of asterisks maybe you should italicize it?

Anyhoo, I thought this was okay-it didn't have much emotion since it was just listing of words but it had your heart in it. :} To get the point better at the end, maybe you should put more of how you saw that God was always there? I don't know, just some thoughts I had after I read it!

Keep it up!