| Reviews for Darien Revised |
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  YourFATHER chapter 17 . 10/30/2010 Yeah, you sure as heck won't. Very nice work with Sessie. You made her act very much like me, as I'm sure was your intention. Your writing skill has gotten a lot better, keep at it. |
 The Ape chapter 16 . 2/12/2010 It seems like a good story, even if it is a bit wet at the minute! I am kinda finding the situation they are in contrived - Darian is overly accpeting of her changes and her best friends keeping this secret from her. It didn't really upset her in anyway. Is there going to be more information on werewolf history? If it happened to me, I would want to know everything there is to know about werewolf history, abilities and threats! That apart, I am enjoying it and would like to see where you go with it. A/N: you might want to include "youtube" on your link at the bottom! |
| TheSilentForce chapter 16 . 2/11/2010 Melanie should worry about Kyle. He's the strangest one of all. |
| Dusk is too lazy to log in chapter 15 . 12/3/2009 Sessie and Kyle's first date would be interesting... XD |
| stian 84 chapter 14 . 12/2/2009 this is a god story i like that it is in the schol time of life and that werewolves are nice i realy like it it would be cool if u posted some more kep up the beautiful work |
| TheSilentForce chapter 14 . 10/16/2009 Kyle has a freakish sense of smell. |
| Duskers chapter 14 . 10/15/2009 FINALLY and yes, I see why you love Kyle. |
| Songs-from-the-Heart chapter 14 . 10/15/2009 Okay so I'm reviewing because you asked/demanded, whatever lol. I liked how it went into Kyle's view and him getting in trouble with the teacher for passing notes nice classic and then i loved how the teacher actually said his grade out loud. Nice I mean what do other people think of that, like Darien. I like how you also put that he likes Sessie it's interesting how things will turn out in the next few chapters. I can't wait for an up-date. Hope you can make one soon if not well everyone has a life so no problem. |
| DuskersANONYMOUSEDITION chapter 13 . 10/11/2009 Didn't feel like signing in... UPDATE! DARN YOU! UPDATE! |
| KT-ImmortalIncarnate chapter 13 . 8/2/2009 Snape snape serverus snape...xD Nice chapter! I look forward to the next one. Poor Kyle, he has to pretend to date Darien. I do not pity Dustin, he didn't know when to buzz off...Geez. _ Anyway, Heels is not spelled Heals unless your talking about a video game or medicine... _ ImmortalIncarnate |
| TheSilentForce chapter 13 . 7/31/2009 O! Have you seen the new Potter Puppet Pals? The one about Snape's diary? I'm really starting to identify with Dustin. It was (and still is) the same way with me. |
| TheSilentForce chapter 12 . 7/31/2009 Kyle Parshis AWESOME! AND Darien is AWESOME too, because she has Blue October as her ringtone! And THAT, my dear Blixiewithwaffles, is enough to make anyone awesome. I promise to read the next chapter soon, but for now, I must go. |
| Duskers chapter 13 . 7/31/2009 Tick tick tick tick tick tick tick tick... Your time for living is ticking away... (growl) |
| KT-ImmortalIncarnate chapter 11 . 7/18/2009 Yay! A revised chapter with mistakes! For instance, if you are referring to more than one wolf, it is wolves, not wolfes, (unless your trying to be funny and pronounce it wolf-ies) _ ImmortalIncarnate PS. Good Luck! |
| TheSilentForce chapter 11 . 7/17/2009 I wish it were that easy to bribe my peers. -sigh- |