Reviews for Darien Revised
YourFATHER chapter 17 . 10/30/2010
Yeah, you sure as heck won't.

Very nice work with Sessie. You made her act very much like me, as I'm sure was your intention.

Your writing skill has gotten a lot better, keep at it.
The Ape chapter 16 . 2/12/2010
It seems like a good story, even if it is a bit wet at the minute!

I am kinda finding the situation they are in contrived - Darian is overly accpeting of her changes and her best friends keeping this secret from her. It didn't really upset her in anyway.

Is there going to be more information on werewolf history? If it happened to me, I would want to know everything there is to know about werewolf history, abilities and threats!

That apart, I am enjoying it and would like to see where you go with it.

A/N: you might want to include "youtube" on your link at the bottom!
TheSilentForce chapter 16 . 2/11/2010
Melanie should worry about Kyle.

He's the strangest one of all.
Dusk is too lazy to log in chapter 15 . 12/3/2009
Sessie and Kyle's first date would be interesting... XD
stian 84 chapter 14 . 12/2/2009
this is a god story i like that it is in the schol time of life

and that werewolves are nice i realy like it it would be cool if u posted some more kep up the beautiful work
TheSilentForce chapter 14 . 10/16/2009
Kyle has a freakish sense of smell.
Duskers chapter 14 . 10/15/2009
FINALLY and yes, I see why you love Kyle.
Songs-from-the-Heart chapter 14 . 10/15/2009
Okay so I'm reviewing because you asked/demanded, whatever lol.

I liked how it went into Kyle's view and him getting in trouble with the teacher for passing notes nice classic and then i loved how the teacher actually said his grade out loud. Nice I mean what do other people think of that, like Darien. I like how you also put that he likes Sessie it's interesting how things will turn out in the next few chapters. I can't wait for an up-date. Hope you can make one soon if not well everyone has a life so no problem.
DuskersANONYMOUSEDITION chapter 13 . 10/11/2009
Didn't feel like signing in...

KT-ImmortalIncarnate chapter 13 . 8/2/2009
Snape snape serverus snape...xD

Nice chapter! I look forward to the next one. Poor Kyle, he has to pretend to date Darien. I do not pity Dustin, he didn't know when to buzz off...Geez.

_ Anyway, Heels is not spelled Heals unless your talking about a video game or medicine...


TheSilentForce chapter 13 . 7/31/2009

Have you seen the new Potter Puppet Pals? The one about Snape's diary?

I'm really starting to identify with Dustin. It was (and still is) the same way with me.
TheSilentForce chapter 12 . 7/31/2009
Kyle Parshis AWESOME!

AND Darien is AWESOME too, because she has Blue October as her ringtone! And THAT, my dear Blixiewithwaffles, is enough to make anyone awesome.

I promise to read the next chapter soon, but for now, I must go.
Duskers chapter 13 . 7/31/2009
Tick tick tick tick tick tick tick tick... Your time for living is ticking away... (growl)
KT-ImmortalIncarnate chapter 11 . 7/18/2009
Yay! A revised chapter with mistakes! For instance, if you are referring to more than one wolf, it is wolves, not wolfes, (unless your trying to be funny and pronounce it wolf-ies)



PS. Good Luck!
TheSilentForce chapter 11 . 7/17/2009
I wish it were that easy to bribe my peers.

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