Reviews for so gone
Electricityscape chapter 1 . 6/17/2009
It's so sad, but wonderful at the same time.

I almost don't like it, because I feel like I'm enjoying someone else's pain.

I like the way it is written, and the way it reveals so much, yet, nothing.

"i left without you on.

and now,

now i'm so gone."

A favorite of mine.
caracal eyes chapter 1 . 6/17/2009 sad. you really expressed the emotions in your words. great descriptions; i especially loved:

"it was a door.

a crack ajar.

just waiting. just waiting,

for someone to open it fully.

no one did."

it sounds so lonely and plaintive. and beautifully worded. :)



P.S. if you have time, i'd be quite thankful if you could review a poem of mine. thanx.