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| Electricityscape chapter 1 . 6/17/2009
It's so sad, but wonderful at the same time.
I almost don't like it, because I feel like I'm enjoying someone else's pain.
I like the way it is written, and the way it reveals so much, yet, nothing.
"i left without you on.
now i'm so gone."
A favorite of mine.
| caracal eyes chapter 1 . 6/17/2009
oh...so sad. you really expressed the emotions in your words. great descriptions; i especially loved:
"it was a door.
a crack ajar.
just waiting. just waiting,
for someone to open it fully.
no one did."
it sounds so lonely and plaintive. and beautifully worded. :)
P.S. if you have time, i'd be quite thankful if you could review a poem of mine. thanx.