|Reviews for Life Apéritif|
| improv chapter 1 . 7/30/2009
I love how you’ve managed to cram so much into one neat little poem; the second stanza is really well written, but the first has to be my favourite. You'll get the hang of smoke rings in the end – just pout really pathetically when you let out the smoke and they'll come, easy D I also like how "the brink" is on a separate line and that it is shorter than the other two stanzas. It's such an interesting poem.