|Reviews for Sleepless Night|
| ADSpencer chapter 1 . 8/27/2009
Really great line breaks in this one. I liked the repetition of "who", too. But the part that engaged me the most was the end of the first stanza. I had to read on from that point. Nicely done. I think you did a great job of capturing the frustration of a late night spend trying to clear your head.
| Kurohime no Miko chapter 1 . 8/27/2009
I like this peom a lot, it had a nice flow to it and the emotions of the speaker were clear. Also your style is real and not, what I call censored.
~Kurohime no Miko~
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| XxRa-RaxX chapter 1 . 8/23/2009
I'm not good at interpreting other people's poetry, but your style flows very well and your imagery is quite vivid. I really like this, because I can identify to the character, I think. I can never sleep at night, not for the same reasons as she can't, but still, I know what it's like to stay awake all night and wish you were sleeping!
From the Roadhouse with Love!
You have been repaid!
| Unique1952 chapter 1 . 7/13/2009
I feel like I can relate to this piece and I also think that you did an excellent job of capturing and expressing these feelings.
I also really like your lines:
Should she follow her heart?
or that bad advice?
Just another sleepless night
with only the moon and stars
So close, yet so far.
everything in perspective.
Again, this was written beautifully.
| Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 6/17/2009
I loved the etheral tone that this had, it was very deep, and well-detailed. The narration was also organic, and I really enjoyed the read. Keep up the good work.