Reviews for he sees himself in shallow water
lenavis chapter 1 . 12/15/2009
sounded pretty lyrical. and the italics, they're nice.

flow of the piece is really excellent, and jesus christ, I think I'm in love with your writing.

Argh I am filled with envy.

and have you noticed, when good-looking (or vain people, that too) pass by reflective surfaces, they always turn their heads and look?
Little girl Big world chapter 1 . 8/14/2009
Wow just breath taking!

Great job!
tonight we bloom chapter 1 . 7/7/2009
that was flawlessly written, i applaud you.
softersin chapter 1 . 6/22/2009
beautifulbeautifulbeautiful. :)

it reminds me ..