Reviews for Most of these Works are Unfinished
Ernest Bloom chapter 1 . 6/26/2009
quite lovely, yes. i love the cylindrical windows. feels like a fog-bound ship. 'temperament.' good job.
sunday night sky chapter 1 . 6/21/2009
beautiful - wise and truthful, it is interesting how you've turned such a small event into something wonderful, captivating, believable, real and somehow poignant. wonderful. lovelyjubbly.
Isca chapter 1 . 6/19/2009
"I am reading to get a sense of you." That's rather wise, actually: reading someone's work to try to understand what kind of person they are.

The rain imagery later on in the poem is unique, especially since your diction there is lovely (e.g. cylindrical, hostile, and mundane).

Oh my. The ending is superb. What a powerful way to end the piece. :D
she smolders chapter 1 . 6/18/2009
Oh, that comparison at the end is just wonderfully special. I like reading the way you see the world. Take care.
Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 6/18/2009
Your pictures are so vivid - and I liked how you turned the library into not just a place but another character between these two; a third person if you will, although the love triangle did not feel crowded.

Your observations are top notch. I really enjoyed this. Keep up the good work.

Much love,