Are you going to finish this story? I can't wait to see where this goes.

NOO! Continue! After looking at the date you started writing this story and the date it was last updated, i realized you're not a very consistent updater. (unless you count consistently long gaps.)

As for the story: I love the story line and the characters. I mean, there are some flaws. For instance, I think David is a nice character but there isnt much development. Then again, we dont really know much about him yet, do we? Only that he's taken a break from school and is in Florida for family reasons. (i think... maybe... possibly. I might have that last fact wrong.) I kind of feel like he's connected to her some way that she will trip over later when she finds out. Just a feeling.

Over all, i like this story a lot. I'm adding you to my favorites just in case you update soon or at all. Don't want to miss that!

I love the attitude and style of this. And humor, or sarcasm, or whatever you want to call it. Totally appeals to me, and is kind of like me and some of the voices I give my characters. The MC is so real, even though I can't realate to her situation first hand, I find myself being sucked it. I'll come back and read more when I have some down time and leave a proper review. Just wanted to send out my initial thoughts. :)

This is great! I love the unique storyline and characters. Please update soon!

Hey! This story is amazing. I really hope you continue to rewrite it- it really sucks that it got erased. But seriously, this really deserves a lot more love than it has right now! I can't wait to read more!

Love this story, you're my new favorite author on here. :) After falling in love with your one-shots, I had to read everything else you posted and they did not disappoint. So I really hope you update soon, can't wait to read more!

I love this story its hilarous can't wait to read more

I adore this story. I really, really do.

It's interesting, and Rory is kind of hilarious sometimes.

Anyway, I look forward to the next chapter immensely. Good job. :D

It's a good story. I really enjoyed it so far. Can't wait for more.

Okay, so I just reread the story. I know your pain, though. I once lost everything on my computer after the hard drive crashed. I liked it just as much the second time through, and hope you're not going to have as long a gap between your next chapter post.

I really like this story so I think you should keep writing! Love it :) keep up the great work!

Absolutely love this! Original characters, fast-paced and interesting storyline, good dialogue - and not a single god-damned mary-sue in sight! Hallelujah! Rory's character is wonderfully sarcastic, and David sounds intruiging. Keep up the good work!

Peace.

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I'm sorry the story got erased but I'm glad you're updating again. I hope nothing like that happens again. :)

You and keeping all the secrets! :) haha. Loving it as usual updatesoon. (:

This is great! PLEASE UPDATE!

David is hot :) rory is funny and its storyline is great and detailed. Love it.