Reviews for breathe deep dearest
The-Golden-Hour chapter 1 . 6/20/2009
YOUR poem- is..."OMG" :D
Cricket Manson chapter 1 . 6/18/2009
For the most part, I love it. The only thing I'm not entirely sure of is the last line in the second verse. It seems a bit blunt after the previous flowery, flowy, kind of rhythm the poem had. But it is YOUR poem, so if you feel strongly connected with that line, leave it. :D