|Reviews for From the Ruins of Emrys|
| Medieval-Rogue chapter 1 . 6/20/2009
I... really like this story. There's only one chapter, but for most readers, one chapter or less is the deciding factor for continued reading. You made it for me.
I'm adding you to Rare Gems, the C2, if you don't mind.
I do have one suggestion, and it's pure looks: to help distinguish scenes, if I were you, I would put a line break between Aden's POV's last paragraph and Dysis'. On the first read, I thought she was in the same room as he, and to keep from confusion, it might be a good idea to clearly separate the two.
I'm definitely curious to read more, learn the plot, and discover the characters. Very good.