Reviews for Someone Gave Head to the Voyeur
kit feral chapter 1 . 9/22/2009
Oh, how wonderfully dramatic.

I love this stanza:

Your muscles disassemble,

a puzzle, undone:



and unsolved again.

Excellent work.
Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 9/5/2009
Your title matches very well with the poem itself. Nice work.

You give such subtle hints of personality in this; laying in luke-warm bathwater, fixing the flowers on the sill. All of the little things that make up a person’s self and daily routine.

I like how you didn’t go too graphic, but I still knew what was going on throughout. Nice job, the ending in particular was very strong as well.

Much love,


Jules, via the Review Marathon (links in my profile)
Love And Some Verses chapter 1 . 8/1/2009
Very gritty, but I like it. I like how you tell a story in your poems, give the words a voice that's incredibly believable. There is something very sad about this story. Brilliantly done.
pixy dust and fairytales chapter 1 . 7/8/2009
good job, i liked it (:

she smolders chapter 1 . 6/19/2009
I've really missed reading the stories you tell in your poems - they're real, in a gritty, "in your face" sort of way. And that's the kind of thing suitable for reading when it's this early in the morning and I have yet to go to sleep. Take care.