|Reviews for Of Dukes and Peasants|
| wakeyourdreamz chapter 38 . 6/25/2011
Aw that was great! I reallky really really enjoyed it!
I'd seen it a couple times, didn't really want to read it, but today I thought, 'what the hey' and just read it - I'm so glad!'
I loved the plotline and how well you wrote a story that was set in the 19th Century! Good job.
A couple mistakes though,
"to the brunette's mass of black waves" was in a chapter and I got really annoyed constantly reading this. Brunette is brown. Black is black. How does she have black hair and brown hair?
And also, Derek said "Get out." to one of the suitors and that doesn't really seem like an 18th Century term, right? Or Serena calling Derek a "Jerk".
Other than that, it was awesome! I loved it~
| Jabberjay chapter 38 . 6/21/2011
Lovely and sweet little story! I was giggling like a schoolgirl in several moments. Some grammatical errors and the speaking manner can be refined more but, hey, it's your story! Good work!
| missmarymacintosh chapter 38 . 6/18/2011
An extraordinary story, I read it all in one sitting. Well done!
| marzmez chapter 38 . 6/4/2011
I found your story while combing through the completed stories. I really liked it It was nice to see a romance where the man isn't immediately attracted to the woman. The fact that he grew to love her, in my oppinion, is more realistic. Good job. If you want to know how the aristocracy works in England let me know. I don't live there, but I have done tons of reading and know how it all works. Also if you need a beta I would be happy to help you. I don't currently have a beta profile, though, so if you don't want that's ok too.
Now I will go check out your other story.
| nicaaaaa chapter 38 . 5/24/2011
I love love love the story! It's just so nice and wonderful! You're an awesome author! I love Derek and Serena. Truth be told, opposites do attract each other :)
keep up the good work!
| thegirlwithbrowneyes chapter 38 . 5/24/2011
Wow! I just spent most of my revision day reading this :P I love, love, LOVE this story! I've actually fallen in love with the characters, mostly Serena and Derek and I've loved reading how their story developed. It's so sweet and you're such a good writer.
This was really great! The epilogue was brilliant and I hated Daniel and Victoria for their characters but they were perfect villains. The Duchess and Lilyan were hilarious and really added something more to the story.
Really wonderful job! I look forward to reading your other stories! :D
| Three'sACompany chapter 38 . 5/21/2011
One of mt fave stories here in FP! splendid job! :)
| little.artist chapter 38 . 5/11/2011
First story I've read where the setting is in the past :D I loved the chemistry between Derek and Serena, though I think the ending was a little small: very adorable though :) Good job!
| Genato chapter 38 . 4/20/2011
your writing style coupled with this genre reminds me of julia quinn. :) i love your conversations between the characters, very humorous and interesting. :)
| The Weatherwitch chapter 38 . 4/15/2011
Aw! So sweet . i loved this, well done for a fabulous story!
| shushumomo chapter 22 . 4/13/2011
The story is entertaining, although there are a few mistakes. What's confusing is the color of Serena's hair. Is it black or light brown, you call her a brunette most of the time, but also describe her as having black hair and blue eyes.
| Uniquely Proud chapter 11 . 4/2/2011
Hello again. :)
Have they let go of the customary bows and curtsies in the late 1800's?
I don't think they have. You might want to look into it. If you take care of the tiny little bits and pieces of historical inaccuracies, your story will be a masterpiece.
| Uniquely Proud chapter 9 . 4/2/2011
I'm reading this story for the third time. xD
May I suggest a little bit of editing?
I don't think ladies back in the 1800's used curse words (of any sort) such as 'ass'.
And Derek is a duke so shouldn't he be addressed as 'Lord Cradwell' instead of 'Mr. Cradwell'? :)
Have a nice day! Love this story to bits.
| Uniquely Proud chapter 38 . 3/22/2011
Aw, this story is just ADORABLE!
Great piece of work!
Great pacing as well.
I hope you don't mind me adding this story to my 'Community'. :)
| wednsdayswithu chapter 1 . 3/4/2011
It was like reading one of those historical romance novels.