Reviews for Of Dukes and Peasants
loveL chapter 38 . 7/11/2011
Awww what a sweet story! I love how you kept Derek & Serena in character even after they were married-their loving arguments would've been missed.
loveL chapter 27 . 7/11/2011
The story's getting more interesting...hmmm I wonder if Serena would start liking Daniel...
loveL chapter 20 . 7/11/2011
You should get this published.

There you go, that's my review (:
loveL chapter 16 . 7/11/2011
Two thumbs up for sure! It's starting to get very interesting...

I like the way you switch between the PoV of Serena and Derek elegantly, and not bluntly stating who's who.
loveL chapter 15 . 7/11/2011
Oh my, I love Lilyan's character! She's so spontaneous, teasing, and adventurous.

I like how you have slowly begun to develop Serena and Derek's relationship, and there's no sudden jump in romance or anything. It makes it seem much more realistic.
A Different Kind of Yellow chapter 38 . 7/11/2011
I just read this whole story in one sitting! And I loved it! I love regency stories... as long as they are told well... and this one was! Congrats!
loveL chapter 6 . 7/11/2011
Ooooh okay, now I understand the age thing better.

The characters are developed very well already, and the conflict between Serena and the Duke is perfectly fierce, which I think would make their love more passionate-in the future...if they get together that is.
loveL chapter 3 . 7/11/2011
I love the Duchess and the Earl, they sound like a perfect matchmaker pair!

But I'm a little confused about the Serena 21 years old now? Is she is, wasn't that considered old back then, since most girls married in teen years?
Country Princess chapter 2 . 7/1/2011
And I just realized I can't count. 60 comes after 59... Wow. I'm quick:/
Country Princess chapter 1 . 7/1/2011
So I saw that this had one review left to make it to a thousand, and I was like I bet that's just killing her! So I decided to review again and tell you again how much I loved reading this!:)
wakeyourdreamz chapter 38 . 6/25/2011
Aw that was great! I reallky really really enjoyed it!

I'd seen it a couple times, didn't really want to read it, but today I thought, 'what the hey' and just read it - I'm so glad!'

I loved the plotline and how well you wrote a story that was set in the 19th Century! Good job.

A couple mistakes though,

"to the brunette's mass of black waves" was in a chapter and I got really annoyed constantly reading this. Brunette is brown. Black is black. How does she have black hair and brown hair?

And also, Derek said "Get out." to one of the suitors and that doesn't really seem like an 18th Century term, right? Or Serena calling Derek a "Jerk".

Other than that, it was awesome! I loved it~

Jabberjay chapter 38 . 6/21/2011
Lovely and sweet little story! I was giggling like a schoolgirl in several moments. Some grammatical errors and the speaking manner can be refined more but, hey, it's your story! Good work!

missmarymacintosh chapter 38 . 6/18/2011
An extraordinary story, I read it all in one sitting. Well done!
marzmez chapter 38 . 6/4/2011
Hi there!

I found your story while combing through the completed stories. I really liked it It was nice to see a romance where the man isn't immediately attracted to the woman. The fact that he grew to love her, in my oppinion, is more realistic. Good job. If you want to know how the aristocracy works in England let me know. I don't live there, but I have done tons of reading and know how it all works. Also if you need a beta I would be happy to help you. I don't currently have a beta profile, though, so if you don't want that's ok too.

Now I will go check out your other story.

nicaaaaa chapter 38 . 5/24/2011
I love love love the story! It's just so nice and wonderful! You're an awesome author! I love Derek and Serena. Truth be told, opposites do attract each other :)


keep up the good work!
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