|Reviews for Of Dukes and Peasants|
| Barbie826 chapter 38 . 12/19/2010
You're really talented.
And I have to say, I always wanted to know what happened next. There was something interesting in each chapter.
The only thing I would say is the whole thing of them thinking the other doesn't like the other, lasted way too long to me. I like that it wasn't fast, but it seemed dragged out. I wanted to see more of them together, then just the last chapter and epilogue. A lot of stories do that, they talk about the chase, then end when they finally get together. And I actually am really interested on what happens when they get together.
Other than that, this was a good story. It seems like an actual book. I love historical romances like this and you have a talent for it!
Can't wait to read more from you. Or even see you on the shelves one day.
| HoPELeSS.RoMaNTiiC chapter 38 . 12/19/2010
I absolutely loved it! But...
One minor issue that really takes it down a peg is your use of current everyday sayings, only because back then, they wouldn't have spoken like that. I'm sorry I can't give you an example but I'm sure you know what I'm talking about. I only mention it because if it was present, it would give a more authentic air to the time setting but because your story lacks it at times, I get this mental image of a girl from the 1900's speaking in a modern day way. Everything else however was fab!
| unmotivated.sap chapter 38 . 12/2/2010
oh my gosh! i absolutely love love LOVE this!
i laugh and cry and smile and everything! i never even stopped reading even when i was doing my homework.
this is so great. i applaud you for such an excellent piece of writing.
| christinaxxyo chapter 38 . 11/29/2010
Derek and Serena are absolutely adorable :) You did an amazing job on this story. I loved all the characters!
| Country Princess chapter 38 . 11/21/2010
Amazing! I loved it!
| smurf-love chapter 38 . 11/14/2010
i love it...such a good story. i hope to read more of your stories in the future
| mixed signals chapter 38 . 11/7/2010
Loved it :D
Was hooked to this story since yesterday night/morning lol :) Love Serena's and Derek's characters and how perfect they are for each other :D Their quarrels are entertaining hehe :)
Thanks for writing this! A lovely piece of work, to be sure. :)
| Princess Mariana chapter 24 . 11/7/2010
Aw, Derek got jealous!
This 'Daniel' guy seems like a very...horrible person...
| Princess Mariana chapter 23 . 11/7/2010
I love Jeremy! I wish I had a friend like that! He's so amazing!
| Princess Mariana chapter 22 . 11/7/2010
Derek is so rude! But it was so sweet that he helped her to her room...*sigh*...
| Princess Mariana chapter 21 . 11/7/2010
I hate Victoria.
| Princess Mariana chapter 19 . 11/7/2010
Derek is so idiotic! He didn't notice how his house was large and quite! Goodness, he needs counseling! And why does Victoria have to come into the picture? She's so obnoxious!
| Princess Mariana chapter 18 . 11/7/2010
'Women are such a pain'. How could Derek say that! He's so sexist! Anyways, everyone knows that GUYS are such a pain, not girls! And he's leaving! Tear, tear, I think I'm starting to like him...
| Princess Mariana chapter 17 . 11/7/2010
You don't just ask someone if they are inlove with someone when you hate the person you are asking! It's just wrong! Derek is such an idiot!
And how could Serena fall in love with idiotic, big, fat, mean, stupid Duke? The world is coming to an end!
| Princess Mariana chapter 16 . 11/7/2010
She's so lucky! She's allowed to be outside in the pooring rain! Awesome!