Reviews for Of Dukes and Peasants
Bookworm0912 chapter 37 . 2/13/2010
Hi! This is one of the bestest bestest stories in the world! I think you are a really great writer. You capture the feeling of love, jealousy and desire perfectly. I give you my 100 percent support in a epilogue! Yeah!

P.S. just a question, do you know any good romance stories that are set in the past?
blazinghues chapter 37 . 2/13/2010
yesyesyesyesyes! Epilogue pleasee! :D This chapter was amazing. It wasn't completely cliche and was freakin awesome just like all chapters! :D Although I am sad to see the end :(...
PeterMoore chapter 37 . 2/13/2010
they finally got together. i'm so happy! yes i would love an epilogue
A.Cookie.For.A.Kiss chapter 37 . 2/13/2010
Yeah an epi! Like there wedding or a few years later when they have some kiddies or something lol

Sorry i'm getting carried away tis up to you.

All that aside...sigh...its over!

I loved that last chapter though it was perfect and i adore this story, i'm kinda sad its ended!

Your an amazing writer and i do believe this story is capable of being published...but thats just me D
Ishita2u chapter 37 . 2/13/2010
hii...

Lovely chapter...

epilogue, epilogue, epilogue,epilogue...

If u any love for ur readers u will definitely write and epilogue...

looking forward to it..

good day

ishita
esmeralda123 chapter 37 . 2/13/2010
luv it luv it! yey finally PP hhehehe please do an epilogue !
Angelica.Eddings chapter 8 . 2/13/2010
I like this story so far. It's cute.

I'd suggest making your story more historically accurate, though. You wrote that Serena is a countess, but that can only be possible if 1. She is an Earl's widow or 2. She is married to an Earl. Her title would be Lady Serena.

Titles can only pass on to unmarried male children. Also, if a Duke has a son, that son would have a Marquess title as a courtesy. The same happens with Marquess (son will be titled as an Earl), Earl (Son will be titled an Viscount) and so on. That son will only come into the next title if his father dies.

Also, in an earlier chapter, you mentioned that the Dowager Duchess and Serena were eating waffles for breakfast. I watched a youtube video a few months ago where two English people relived different periods in British history, and waffles were not on the menu. I can't find anything on an upper class's menu on google, but the middle class people ate Bacon, Eggs, Kedgeree

Grilled Sheep's Kidneys

Toast, Marmalade

Tea, Coffee, Cocoa.

Other than that, I enjoy your story. Writing a historical is difficult, so I doubt that anyone can get all the facts correct.

Good luck
MsBling chapter 37 . 2/13/2010
Congrats a finishing your was amazing one of the best story i ever read and i really hope you do a epilogue.
Paige Cruz chapter 37 . 2/13/2010
sweet, and it still has that humorous catch to it. :)

Congratulations on finishing your story. I know there might be an epilogue coming up, but I guess you deserve a standing ovation right about now, because applauses cannot suffice the brilliance of your work. XD lol. Vocabulary over-drive.

"Serena smiled at the typical arrogant answer before the Duke rammed his mouth over hers in a passionate lock." cue squeal. :))
Deeps chapter 37 . 2/13/2010
aah! so sweet

but please post the epilogue soon. i can't wait to read it.
kokani chapter 37 . 2/12/2010
This story is outstanding and such a tease! LOL.

This is probably the best story i've read on fictionpress! I love hate turns into love stories, and i think you just won first prize :) Please please please include an epilogue! and write some more stories similar to this one! It would be greatly appreciated! :D
codeblue92 chapter 37 . 2/12/2010
this is so sweet :))
Alice's Pendant chapter 37 . 2/12/2010
aww.. I love happy endings! Especially between Derek and Serena! XDD and yes! Please write an Epilogue!

Are you planning to write a new story any time soon?

delineations.
Just Alice chapter 37 . 2/12/2010
Ah, many grins at this chapter!

And I think that was the PERFECT word to end on. C:
u wouldjustbe AWESO without ME chapter 37 . 2/12/2010
i would like to have a derek in my life...
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