Reviews for a really old really bad mermaid story with a cheesy title
that random chick chapter 1 . 5/29/2011
Wow. I totally love this! It left me wanting to read more. Truly awesome.
Smurph92 chapter 1 . 7/3/2010
why didn't you pursue this story?
estrela jem chapter 1 . 6/30/2010
You know ... no offense or anything (Everyone has the right to do what they want with their own stories) but if you're so scared of plagiarism then why are you even still posting stories on this site? In my opinion picking and choosing which stories you're going to post becasue of this is a little odd, especially when they have already been posted for quite a while (if you've finished them ...)If you're planning on publishing them than of course you'd want to take them off but if you're going to remove a story then please remove all of it. Putting just the prelude kind of makes me )and I'm sure many others) feel betrayed (for lack of a better word). I read the description and think "Great a new story that seems very original and exciting" only read at the last word that it's removed. And then because I see that there is a chapter, thinking that it's an authors note about why it's been removed (maybe you're publishing ...) and curious as to why I read it and realize that it's a prelude and that the story really did seem very exciting and that I would have liked to read more of it ... All I'm saying is that please don't get our hopes up with an exciting summary and deny us the actual story.
Destiny1406 chapter 48 . 2/17/2010
Yay! I finished it! You can take it off here now lol it was really good!
Destiny1406 chapter 42 . 2/17/2010
this chapter was good and it explained a lot. it's about time that Thrice let her haver her memories back though lol :) Can't wait to finish this! i'm almost done! Just please dont' erase the chatpers till then! lol ;)

Haybell :)
Destiny1406 chapter 36 . 2/17/2010
this chapter was really good, though i can't seem to figure out for sure if shes' the halfling... can't wait to read more!
Destiny1406 chapter 25 . 2/12/2010
Hello yet again;

This is the last review for the night. I loved Aubrey, he's so funny. he's so cold, yet loves to argue. He seems ok, except his name... i thought that Aubrey was a girl's name... is it a unisex name?

I can't wait to meet both guys in Becca's life. Who is that mysterious guy that is a mute that we haven't met yet? and who is Adam, her date? lol. Can't wait to meet them and see how they are.

Night. Hope to read more tomorrow!

Haybell :)
Destiny1406 chapter 23 . 2/12/2010
Hello again;

i know this is the same night, but wow... so it wasn't a dream? im' still confused on that part, but it will probably be explained soon. Are they mates or something? is that why they feel that underlying attraction for each other? Can't wait to find out what happens next.

PS: Very well written so far (the entire story all together)


Destiny1406 chapter 21 . 2/12/2010
Hello my friend;

It's been a long time :) i'm planning on trying to finish this story by the end of this weekend :) so wish me luck.

This was a good chapter, though i can't tell if the last part was a dream, or if it was really happening to her. I bet i'll find out next chapter though :)

Haybell ;)

PS: be ready to hear more from me soon!
Unleash the Bats chapter 1 . 2/6/2010
I was not complaining. And this author's note shows clearly that you are of the age that you say you are in your profile.

Please have a good rest of your life.
Unleash the Bats chapter 43 . 2/5/2010
Though taking down the first ten chapters fights plagarism, it keeps new readers from enjoying your work.

And it's frustrating when you find a story that you really would like to read and you are unable to.
authorLH chapter 1 . 1/29/2010
I loved this story!

-Lain :]
Wheretheliliesblow chapter 1 . 1/15/2010
This is a wonderful story and i fully commend you on it. It's very well written and hard not to fall in love with the characters. I hope you write even more wonderful stories and perhaps trust people again in time to put back those chapters.

once again, very nice.
midnightsun101 chapter 43 . 1/13/2010
hi, i really wanted to read this story! i was wondering if you could put the first ten chapters back up so that i can? :)

please :P:)
The Bloodied Quill chapter 43 . 12/24/2009
My friend reccomended this story to me, and I was looking forward to reading it. I read the A/N at the end of ch. 41 but still would like to read the other chapters that have been taken down. Will you re-upload them?
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