Reviews for White Rice
Harriet Usher chapter 1 . 3/28/2013
I liked the reported speech in this; some have accused me of being overly fond of gimmicks in writing, like odd perspectives and epistolary format. They would be right, but I refuse to change for anyone. Loved the twist at the end, and some little pieces of imagery sprinkled here and there were nicely effective- the line about white rice sticking to the cafeteria matron's hand like 'leprosy' comes to mind. All in all, a fun little read.
MurphysDragon chapter 1 . 6/20/2009
Wow. That was an incredibly moving story. Eleven years ago, I actually lost a sister, and your words just...

I hope you got a high grade on this. It is well deserved.