Reviews for Dark Matter
May Elizabeth chapter 4 . 8/14/2009
I'm really repeating myself but this poem is amazing.
May Elizabeth chapter 3 . 8/14/2009
Wow. You have tremendous talent.
May Elizabeth chapter 2 . 8/14/2009
Another haunting poem. My fave lines:

A consuming hunger compels Them now

"A seeded force that rules all

What to-do during the day

We are quiet as need be

We will wait for your fall

We do what We must do

We will stalk as predators do

Concealed, you cannot see Us now

We will wait for your fall

All for one, one for all

What a twisted world this be

We will be invisible by day"
May Elizabeth chapter 1 . 8/14/2009
Oh my God, this poem stole my breath, and ripped my heart out of my chest. This poem was well-written, vivid, stunning, and poetic. Wow. Just wow.
Flarexrite chapter 1 . 8/13/2009
wow...so true!

i really like it:)
Musickk Darling chapter 6 . 6/28/2009
Once again, beautiful.

You write in a way that makes me feel everything you are writing about. It's very sensual.

Great job.
Musickk Darling chapter 5 . 6/26/2009
Your writing is very beautiful.

It's emotionally fueled, yet concise; realistic.

You know how to describe a situation in a way that appeals to nearly all of the senses instead of just one.

I loved this. The issues you write about, the way you write about them. It really struck a chord with me.

I can't wait for the next update.
Wings chapter 4 . 6/24/2009
Okay, that seriously was awesome. Good transitions, going from the beautiful to the not-so-beautiful, and revealing the truth...Fantastic.
Wings chapter 3 . 6/24/2009
...Is some of this Latin?

It was good, I like how you told a story...
Wings Taylor J. Nobles logged chapter 2 . 6/20/2009
I didn't quite get this one as well...but it was good, certainly. Intriguing...

You're a good poet.

Wings
Taylor J. Nobles chapter 1 . 6/20/2009
Oh, God...

I was suicidal for a while and the last time I tried to kill myself was through strangulation...it's so true...I felt like I was dying again...

That was perfect. Jeez. How did you do that?

Wow.

Wings