okay first of all... raina is a badass! hmm.. i don't really have anything to say yet except that i think it would be an interesting story once all the other chapters are done. can't wait to read more!

wow, this seems like an epic story.

i like your writing and dialogue! how is it though that she cannot remember 'Caelus', even if it was many years and 'lives' ago? hmm...

well keep updating!