Reviews for Mafia Runner
Yunie chapter 31 . 4/14
So I began reading your story with the mindset that this was going to be a guilty pleasure read and I wasn't going to become too invested in it.

Buuuuuuuuuuuuuut. Afton oh my gosh Afton. Although I would have stayed the hell away from Lucian if I were in his place, and I felt he should've been especially mad knowing that Lucian was exposing him to danger, I can see why he would go for Lucian because the guy really is a decent human despite his background. Also, so much bs happened to him in a relatively short amount of time(partially Lucian's fault too), and somehow Afton manages to hold his ground. And chapter 31? Afton is boss(no pun intended).

I honestly didn't like Lucian at all during the beginning but that changed when...honestly, when Afton began to fall for the guy. Actually scratch the at all part because Lucian was quite amusing during some of the early chapters(still didn't really like him). Sure Lucian was being incredibly selfish by being around Afton, but it was obvious that he loved Afton and not only for shallow reasons. He was possessive but he also saw Afton as an individual, and his character wound up growing on me.

So yeah, despite expecting something a little more cliched, this story proved to be so much more than that and had a lot of substance.

I hope to see an update because I know this story is coming to an end and its just too good to remain unfinished.

Take care!
Painted Desert chapter 10 . 4/12
I've just discovered this story and I love it. I love the physical description of Afton and Lucian's domineering and sincere personality. One thing on this chapter and its so small. I simply can't imagine Lucian wearing boxers. It sounds ridiculous but he's a confident, sleek, elegant, and fashionable mafia underboss. I imagine him wearing briefs or at least boxer briefs. Anyway, minuscule really but just my crazy imagination! Love the story!
Guest chapter 31 . 4/7
OH MY GOD! Where are you now? please do continue this one... i really love it...man...
as i love you. hahahaha take care always
corina.culita chapter 31 . 4/6
Please please please continue this story.I hope there''ll be a sequel as well. I love if he's subtle I can see he loves ans he's proud of Afton.
I hope your alive and healthy but please give us an update.
Guest chapter 31 . 3/26
Please, please, don't be dead, so that you may finish this story!
ucantcme159 chapter 31 . 3/24
Man, I've re-read the entire series twice this week! It's been forever, but I can't stop hoping for an update! I love almost all of Afton and Lucian's interaction: it's funny, cute, but can also make your heart pang.

When I was re-reading the part where Marcus says he was supposed to raise Afton, it made me really curious as to what Afton would be like if that happened. Does anybody else wonder?
Lunar of dreams chapter 31 . 3/15
This story was worth the love and time, here I thought people couldn't really make the whole mafia theme work but u made it work and for once the main character wasn't so annoying so I loved it xxx

I really want the update!
makoslits chapter 31 . 3/14
Iota just two chapters left! Please fin te strength to just finish that! It's too late to abandon now!
morningstorm70 chapter 31 . 3/2
I hope that there is more yo this story or a sequel
Guest chapter 31 . 3/1
i wish you could write a one-shot with marcus and noah? i think that's her name. it's been so long! but of course that's just my wishful thinking, what i absolutely, positively want to see is the 32 chapter! so, please don't abandon this story. there are so many people waiting for this story to update. i'm sure you're aware that not everyone leaves a review, but i'm sure you can tell by looking at the stats that we ARE checking back again and again and again, waiting.
Guest chapter 31 . 2/28
Plz finish, I want my boys to have a happy ending! That's all I ask.
Sachiana chapter 31 . 2/27
Please dont abandon this story. It's so good and you're so close to finishing. I want to know the ending. It's killing me.
Mah chapter 1 . 2/17
"...even if I would be standing..." The grammar nazi in me screams in agony...
pikachuxtoxthexrescue chapter 31 . 2/12
uggggggh. You're killing me here
Guest chapter 1 . 2/5
don't abandon this story!
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