Reviews for Mafia Runner
chenee1988 chapter 32 . 9/16/2015
you are a deserter my friend, but if you continue to write little gems like this one i may forever wait for your return.
Lily806 chapter 32 . 9/15/2015
Omg! I am so happy you made an epilogue and very surprised xD. I really like how you tied Afton and Lucian's future in with mafia in Britain. It was a really good ending because usually you would expect they would have trouble and stuff. I really like the newfound sense of excitement that Afton has for the mafia and his father. I have to say, this story makes great material for a sequel? Afton and Lucian in Britain is something I would LOVE to read. You're a great writer, and this is very much publishing material. I have read a LOT of books in my lifetime and stories that make you feel like you're reading a book are rare indeed especially on sites like you so much for this wonderful story. I will be watching VERY closely to see any more possible stories you write. XD
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thecowonthebox chapter 32 . 9/15/2015
So amazing ! All the story was really great ! Thanks again for this last update. You made my day. :) I though this story was dead... Thank you !
I hope reading more of you soon. You're a talented author.
Deviantdiantha chapter 32 . 9/15/2015
First I just want to say that I'm happy you're safe and sound! Also happy about an ending to this story! It was a really nice ending and I am looking forward to reading whatever you have in store for us next!
rAywOLf sHibELt chapter 32 . 9/15/2015
Good ending. Thank you.
Fryvi chapter 9 . 9/15/2015
I can't help but disagree with how controling Lucian is being.. I sure hope Afton doesn't give in too easily
LiveLoveRead95 chapter 32 . 9/15/2015
Well first off Thank You so much for updating this final chapter T.T These are tears of joy I tell you. I have read and re-read this story so many times and I have and am pretty sure that I will never get tired of it. I am so proud of Afton for having grown so much and I just Love Afton and Lucian's relationship. I know you said you were going to focus on other stories but I think it would be really awesome if you were to write a chapter or a short sequel showing Afton and Lucian's life in Britain, if they chose to stay there or not. How Afton's relationship goes with his father and more. To be honest I just don't want this story to end, it makes me so upset to think that there won't be anymore Afton and Lucian to lighten up my day. Thank you so much for this amazing story you are a great writer and I am looking forward to your future stories. :)
Fryvi chapter 5 . 9/15/2015
Such a sweet gesture It shows how Lucian understands at least a bit about Afton, not giving him something expensive, but something meaningful instead.
bell13 chapter 32 . 9/15/2015
Thank you so much for your amazing writing. I love this story so much and it was worthy of every minute of waiting for the end. Afton and Lucian are one of my most favorite characters I have ever read about! :)
I hope you will write more stories and I'am willing to wait for them because as I mentioned you're amazing writer!
TheoLavigne chapter 32 . 9/15/2015
I'm Hyperventilating right now ! I can't believe you updated after so long! I'm so happy right now, you made my day, week, month!
I commented without reading the chapter, I couldn't wait to express the way I feel!
bellehawk chapter 32 . 9/15/2015
Wow I have missed this story and I'm sad to see it finished. This story hooked me into mafia related stories and I found myself watching a 145 episodes anime. I hope to see you write more. I would definitely read it
La Imperatrice chapter 32 . 9/14/2015
I've been following this story for years, and I can't believe it's now complete. I love your writing style, and I especially love your ability to convey emotions. I'm enthusiastically looking forward to whatever you write next :)
Dinosaurs R Dead chapter 32 . 9/14/2015
I shouldn't really repeat what I screamed when I saw that you'd updated. There would be a lot of characters that really aren't appropriate, even for an M rated story :P

WOW. What an unexpected ending to one of my favourite stories. It's nice Afton and Lucian's story has come to a somewhat happy, yet ambiguous, close- and I'm glad Marcus made a return in the end... though I would like to know more about his character. He's kind of like a dark hero Afton, you know? All of his charm but none of his innocence. He's a great character. If you're motivated, it would make a fantastic prequel.

I love your writing, I can't say that enough. I found this story a while ago and I always come back to it. Your writing is so organised and characters so sharpened in their personalities and mannerisms, you have them down perfectly. It's something I can never grasp, no matter how much I love my characters, it's very hard to write in the strength that you do. I understand it gets hard at times, especially with original works (I only publish Fanfictions to get feedback and my original works get anxiously left behind) but trust me, just stay strong in yourself. It's very admirable you give 100%- you really have the qualities of being a great author one day. I would definitely pay to read your stuff one day :D
Tommy14 chapter 32 . 9/14/2015
Great ending. Thank you for finishing this story. I bet you feel relieved not to have it hanging over you too.
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