Reviews for Picture Perfect |
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![]() ![]() That was hilarious. James proved his worth in the end |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is so cute and funny! |
![]() ![]() ![]() It is real fun to read it.. |
![]() ![]() The last line of this story totally perfect! :-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() That. was. incredible. |
![]() ![]() THIS IS FREAKING HILARIOUS! LOVE IT |
![]() ![]() This was written very well! It actually made me smile really stupidly haha please write mooooore xx |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi! It's Juliet from A Drop of Romeo. When your story was featured on ADoR, this review was written by a judge: This one-shot belongs in the history books as the first story in a male's POV that I've read on FictionPress. I know that there are more out there, but I tend to shy away from the unfamiliar; however, this one made me want to read more of them. It's about Bryan, who, on a dare, is in a public library photocopying his rear end (butt-copying, he dubs it). His friend, James, is the one who dared him to do so and put the picture up at school for all to see come Monday morning. Of course, as fate would have it, Bryan's long-time crush (he calls her "The One") catches him in the act, thus ensuing humiliation, hilarity, and those scenes that make you go awww! In the "Why You Like It" portion of the suggestion form (which, if you were wondering, the judges totally take into account), the suggestor said the voice sounds female-ish at times, which I guess I can understand, but I never personally got that idea while reading it. Although, I'm not a guy so I could be totally wrong about that. Masculine or not, the voice was funny, witty, realistic, and sweet. The plot was original but not unbelievable; the characters were likable and quirky; the dialogue was easy to imagine. I loved the ending because it was vague and completely open-ended, which is very hard to pull off in a satisfying way. Picture Perfect definitely sets itself apart from other one-shots and even full-length stories on FictionPress with its originality, silliness, and unique charm. |
![]() ![]() Made me smile. I like your sense of humour. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Funny story, I love it :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww, so cute! I totally loved it :) It was a great idea posting the photocopy in her locker! Regards, Diane. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Haha great! What is TaD anyway? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was honestly ready to just stop reading it when Bryan read the note but then, you made it all better! Quite thankful for that. I really liked the plot and I was about to write a fiction from a guy's point of view and this helped. Thanks.(: xoxo, JustWish |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG Adorable! Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() THIS IS SOOOOOO FUNNY I BURST OUT LAUGHING! "Prince Charming called. He wants his boxers back." Genius! |