|Reviews for all shall fade|
| tonight we bloom chapter 1 . 8/6/2009
With every new piece I read of yours, my jaw drops lower and lower. This is so flawless in every aspect.
| Kate Marshall chapter 1 . 7/19/2009
I love the word choice of 'thunder' in regards to his laughter. I get the clear sound of a loud, surrounding kind of laugh. Very descriptive. :)
"i see purple summers and violent lovers" I like that phrase. Because of the line break, this wasn't a rhyme or an internal rhyme, but the similar sounds gave a nice rhythm to the poem.
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| Autumn's Addiction chapter 1 . 7/2/2009
I really like this. Especially the first part of it. It's beautiful, really :)
I also like the (or am i dying?) part. I don't know, it just really stood out to me. This was awesome. Keep writing! (not that I think that you wouldn't...) You're great with poetry
| Isca chapter 1 . 6/23/2009
"Violent lovers." How erotic.
"Purple summers." Unique colour choice. Strong imagery.
"I lament the loss of a soul that I did not yet understand." Brilliant. What a graceful line. Wow. :D
"Or am I dying?" Ah yes, it is difficult sometimes to decide whether one is dying from joy or dying from pain.
| myturntobebrave chapter 1 . 6/22/2009
wow wow wow.
(kind of reminded me of spring awakening.)
but in a good way.