|Reviews for Is subtle fatality|
| Midnight In Eden chapter 1 . 11/18/2009
Dear God this is so clever it almost makes me sick. The framing stanzas, to me, feel like you've deliberately stuffed with the syntax to piss off those writers who write anything and deem it worthy because they're in love.
A nice slap in the face coupled with a superior smirk - my favorite kind of poetry.
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 8/7/2009
I like this, I think it's quite funny and true. I especially like the parenthesis and italics. The side comments really added a great touch. I think you did good with wording and phrasing that illustrated your point. Nicely done.
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| Unique1952 chapter 1 . 7/6/2009
I especially like the back and forth in this section:
I'm sorry sir (or mam)
if you're a tad bit confused (not really)
but I've been smitten by love (what's that?)
and numbed by rejection (HAH angst)
so I don't even try (I noticed.)
to make these words (rhyme?)
Nice work with this, the entire piece ws very fascinating and really good.