Ohmygod! I love it! :D please write more! XP so cute!

first, I want you to know that the plot is good, I mean from the background story and the problem it will follow of the triangle love.

however, the story is "jumping" in other word, too fast. and some thing is hard to understand, like chasing through the school only to ask something. another is the name. I know you are not a Japanese (CMIIW) but the name is just too common to be.

this is very cute!

update soon!