|Reviews for Dreams of Hope|
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 8/9/2009
"Into a dark abyss to make its claims."... this line seemed forced for the rhyme. Who's making claims on what? It just sounded odd.
"And world from falling apart at the seems."...seams. Again seemed a bit forced for the rhyme.
I really liked the beginning. I think your descriptions were really powerful and definitely captivated me. I think the rest of it was still good, but the images just weren't as powerful in my opinion. Still, it was a good piece.
PS If you're bored check out the Review Game and/or its Review Marathon (links in my profile).
| Ultimate Cyclops chapter 1 . 6/21/2009
Another favorite. Again, the way you use your words is amazing baby. That's what makes your work so good Love you.