What? That's it? They can heal people but it harms them...? Well, that's a disappointment, to say the least. I though they would get powers or something.
Oh god! She's going to be one of those heroines that can't do anything by themselves and has to be protected by everyone. I'm not sure if I want to continue this story.

I really didn't like this chapter, it was so fucking creepy. Seriously.
Why did you make it like it was a show or something. Whatever was happening to them seemed really personnal and...intimate, almost. But there's the entire school watching. So yeah, creepy. It made me so uncomfortable.
But honestly they're such idiots to not have realized that the school was composed of werewolves, vampires and witches. I got that the moment they arrived at school. It makes them seem very dense to be so oblivious.

Mike and Matt are so selfish, they know it hurts Rose, litterally, when she's away from Richardson but they still did that. In the mean time they're all lovely dovey with their girlfriends in front of her. F-ing assholes!

So far I don't like the twins. They're so immature. The story would be more enjoyable without them but well...*sigh*

toooooooooooo many hot guys!1

I really loved this story. It was really well written. The characters were good. The story was good. I am looking forward to reading the sequel (which I'll start as soon as I post this). Good luck and have fun! :)

Awesome story. I obviously haven't gotten very far yet, but I love if already. :)

i dont really like alex, or their school for that matter.

it's like they didnt teach any useful thing to the triplets. they obviously should be taught how to defend themselves, at least.

and the army? looks like they were some bs warriors. even the general was not that powerful.

it's all talk and very little action. the school is

i really like the general idea of ur story but i think u can do much much better in writing the plots.

im hope im not being too harsh cause it's just my honest opinion on the story so far.

I really like how you grasped how it is to have two brothers who look exactly the same, because I do. And the really funny part is that I am the only one who can tell them apart with my eyes shut. They're three years older than me though, so at the moment they're at college while I'm still in highschool. Anyways, I'm liking this story so far and can't wait to find out why Rose keeps feeling familiar about the professor.

wow. i gotta say, your story should be published! this is brilliant! and being the geek that i am, of course i love this! shame though, that i never got to read the original version. but its okay!

anyway, like i mention, your story is absolutely brilliant. although i thought the ending came too suddenly to me.

and theres another thing that gets to me. Alex is supposed to be the General meaning he's supposed to be the best. but apparently, the hunters are beating him like pancakes! i do find that abit odd.

and the whole 'i'll die if you dont love me' love story. i know its important and part of the story and all but i cant help thinking New Moon. (im not exactly a fan, thats why. heh.)

but nevertheless, continue on this brilliant journey of a story! fav :)

ok im off to read Book Two!

Wow, so I read this story already before you redid it and am kind of excited to read the new version! It's more different (?) than I expected, but it's still done very well! Can't wait to see what else is new!

Wow this story is so great! I absolutely love it. How did you come up with it? Lol wow it must aquire a lot of imagination! Congratulations on your baby, how old are you lol? I read that note thing where you say your not a teenager but your not that old either or something like that lol :p. Well on to the sequel!

sorry its ben a while since i've updated. finals have been getting to me. i've been studying like crazy!

but i love the way you ended it, instead of the orginal version. love the new surprises and learning about the their world. i shall go and read hunted now

o and good luck with the baby

ahh shyit, that was some sweet stuff. :D It makes me smile hugely to read this story again. :D And yes it makes sense now, thanks for the clarification.

Wo. So Amelia (Alex's Sister) Is a hunter? But she was at the Richardson house? Im confused. But I like it. Its pazazy. :D