| Reviews for When Things Come Undone |
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   Opheliac in Me chapter 8 . 11/22/2009 updae please |
| castiel89 chapter 8 . 8/29/2009 So... I am completely hooked on this story... Are you going to put in more music videos anytime soon? I really enjoy them. I cannot wait for Marcus to find out the truth! Anxiously awaiting your next update! |
| deathanddawn chapter 8 . 7/21/2009 so iv come to the end of all that you've written so far :( that bit about gabriela (sp?) was soo sadd... if u get me. and are marcus and Korey now 'together'? update very soonn :] unLuKy |
| deathanddawn chapter 7 . 7/21/2009 those emails from Marcus to 'Kay'... so cute :] unLuKy |
| deathanddawn chapter 6 . 7/21/2009 oh... english... and marcus... itz not fair... i want something like that to happen during english to me :] unLuKy |
| deathanddawn chapter 5 . 7/21/2009 woww! this chapter... and CRYSTAL :o OMG! unLuKy |
| deathanddawn chapter 4 . 7/21/2009 kool chapter :] i like the italian :] unLuKy |
| deathanddawn chapter 3 . 7/21/2009 nothing much to say here... unLuKy |
| deathanddawn chapter 2 . 7/21/2009 so iv read this chapter... and thatz soo kooll... about the band and all... although i think that they should try and write an original song... unLuKy |
| deathanddawn chapter 1 . 7/21/2009 hey! great start! this sounds soo funn... so now onto chapter :) unLuKy |
| A. Watts chapter 8 . 7/21/2009 Great story! I can't wait for more! |
| As Daylight Fades chapter 8 . 7/21/2009 I've always wanted to see Employee of the Month... I needa buy it some time XD WTH. I hate people like Gabriele x.x Atleast he went to jail :D And yes, your background was awesome. You have a pretty good reason to feel smug ;D Update soon! Kitty xzx |
| BCB chapter 2 . 7/21/2009 Check all your spelling, I mean you spelled threw and not through. That's a huge part of a good story: good grammar. And uh I don't like this storyline, but I'm not going to read it, so that's good. And it's all in the summary, that baits people. I wasn't a fan of the summary, and mainly the whole youtube fame being desirable. But you wrote what you knew, props to that. |
| cndysweetmss chapter 2 . 7/21/2009 Really Good!: |
| As Daylight Fades chapter 7 . 7/17/2009 You're better than me at updating! And YAY, More Italian! I'm just back from HP - Again. Late reply, sorry . Ah, the common denial. and I like the email twist on Youtube. Sure, she should have realised, but I guess because it was a hunch about marcus who she is certain she doesnt like (and vice versa)then it was easy for her to shrug off I think about things too much . Update soon! Kitty xzx |