Reviews for Sonnet 306, Minus 2
Louis Denair chapter 1 . 6/28/2009
Wow, really juicy verse. It flows so well and the rhymes are sublime. It reminds me of Shakespeare's sonnets very much indeed though perhaps the use of thees and thous is a little bit excessive. The last lines are perfect. Really breath-taking.
Ernest Bloom chapter 1 . 6/27/2009
i can't sonnet.

those last three lines:

Isca chapter 1 . 6/23/2009
You need to go through the poem and fix some of the lines-many are either 9 or 11 syllables long instead of 10.

"Thou may tunnel thyself." Brilliant line. It's very avant-garde. I also really loved the 'coral' part. :D

Keep up the good work!