|Reviews for The Truth As I See It|
| The Red Raven chapter 1 . 11/3/2011
You're poems are ,WTF?You sound so conceited and freakish it's pitiful.
| ZyggyGirl chapter 1 . 11/11/2010
Good points, all. I didn't know much about the whole situation, though, so I don't don't really have a opinion one way or another.
Good continuity with the rhyme scheme, though.
| Sairento-shi chapter 1 . 10/28/2010
Ah, I really enjoyed this one. Your anger for the spotlight and admiration of MJ stands out and hits really well. For some reason, I can totally see this as a song.
| white wolf97 chapter 1 . 2/12/2010
omg, this was posted two days before he died. wow. that is just ironic, but good job i LOVE IT
| screen of supreme good fortune chapter 1 . 6/22/2009
I love MJ. That's why I read this. Aside from being a bit crude in spots, ie. unnatural, forced rhymes and a few spelling errors, it was actually a lot better than I expected. However, I dislike the overly didactic, patronizing tone - too many questions directed at the reader for one thing. Nothing a small rewrite couldn't fix.