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Little girl Big world chapter 1 . 7/9/2009
This was good, I liked the use questions.

"but i've been let down so many times,

what makes me think that you aren't one?"

-I liked these lines

"i want to take all back,

but i can't close my mouth,"

-And these ones as well. Though I think its supposed to be 'i

want to take it all back' you left out the it. Just a little

mistake I saw.

Anyways, great work! I enjoyed reading this!