|Reviews for Hearing|
| Little girl Big world chapter 1 . 7/9/2009
This was good, I liked the use questions.
"but i've been let down so many times,
what makes me think that you aren't one?"
-I liked these lines
"i want to take all back,
but i can't close my mouth,"
-And these ones as well. Though I think its supposed to be 'i
want to take it all back' you left out the it. Just a little
mistake I saw.
Anyways, great work! I enjoyed reading this!