Reviews for You Belong With Me
HeartLikePorcelain chapter 8 . 4/23/2010
happy b-lated birthday! hope you had tons of fun. man, another awesome chapter! dayum blake is something lol -drools-
u wouldjustbe AWESO without ME chapter 8 . 4/20/2010
royce vs Blake..this shall be very exciting

i'm pesonally voting for royce..who knows who blake really is? A quarterback with a sucky aim but very cute ideas for dates or a seriel rapists whose alias is a quarterback with a sucky aim but have very cute ideas for dates? two weeks is not enough to know someone...

Plus, Royce famous

And everyone knows that famous$

Therefore Royce $

My mathematics skills are epic :)
aureliasilver chapter 8 . 4/20/2010
WOW! I must say that I got very excited when I realized that this would be your 100th review...YAY! Now I'm hoping someone else doesnt submit a review while I'm typing this. Just wanted to say I love the turn this has taken. Is she finally going to pick up her guitar again? Will her boyfiend get drafted into the NFL? There's so much potential. But I'd also like to hear about what happened to the Hollywood crowd, esp Logan :)
JESSNUTSSS chapter 8 . 4/19/2010
So I'm currently reading this from my phone and I'm getting cross eyed already. Lol. I owe you reviews, and I shall deliver! Miss and love ya, skank
FreekyDisaster18 chapter 8 . 4/19/2010
And you've just succeeded in making Helen a member of team Blake! Hell we knew it was going to happen but this quick? That's pure writing skill! This is a fantastic chapter and I'm glad that Connor told her the facts straight and didn't pussy foot around! He's a cool character. Blake was oh so perfect *daydreams a moment* and I can't wait to see more of him.


helzyeah chapter 8 . 4/19/2010
i hope royce and julia never get to gether! there all wrong for each other!
Guest chapter 8 . 4/19/2010
Sucks to be Royce, nyah! :P

Klake sounds really perfect. Not sure if it's a gaood or bad thing...

Update soon!
pinkeclipse chapter 8 . 4/18/2010
thank you so much for the update! im so glad connor was there for her! hope she does pursue a music career! I hope blake is serious about her...
heidipandabear chapter 8 . 4/18/2010
aw. i like it.

it's so cute.

i'm too lazy to log in.

and type too much.

update soon.
All Over You chapter 8 . 4/18/2010
You already know this, but:

HeartLikePorcelain chapter 7 . 4/5/2010
oh my god i'm so loving this story! please please update son! arrg lol i wan't royce and jules to be together [. ugh i wish i could kick the hell out of ve lol.
kesah.rose chapter 7 . 3/18/2010
wow.. royce is such a jerk... cant wait to see what happens...
Jinxed Rogue chapter 7 . 3/13/2010
I really like this story. You've got vivid characters and a lot of emotions. I think the one thing you should work on is scaling back on the dramatics. It's a good story, but the extreme emotional responses to events (e.g. Royce flying off the handle with Juli happened too quickly, or Juli flipping on the hotel guy then calling herself calm) need to be paced a bit slower. I think that Royce being so madly in love with Ve could be a little more ambivalent. I don't get the feeling that he loves her. Focus on her physical attributes a bit more.

I like how you're writing Royce so far. So many writers neglect to give a different voice to their second narrator, but here we get two very distinct points of view. I also like his flawed mentality.

Anyway, I'm waiting for your next update! :)
Jinxed Rogue chapter 5 . 3/13/2010
Seriously, what is Royce smoking out there in LA?
FreekyDisaster18 chapter 7 . 2/26/2010
Yes, yes you have mucked up big style Royce! I loved the Logan/Royce altercation. It was fantastically written and I'm totally envious of your writing skills. I can't wait for your next chapter :D
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