|Reviews for Inability|
| Old-Wives-Tale chapter 1 . 6/22/2009
I think it's alright. I like the point of view it has and how the person is. It's very interesting. I like the whole stage and script bit the most. I think it starts to get a little long after a while though, maybe you could have added some other example type things to keep it going, instead of the same feelings over and over? I don't know, but overall it was pretty good.