i liked the story.. need some editing though, you've missed some words in the sentences. :)

please do update soon! :) our christmas break is near so i'll have plenty of time reading! :)

I read this whole entire story today and honestly the amount of reviews does not justify it. This story is so great and well written. This is the first story that actually made me cry, and more than once! Lol good job, update soon! You can't just leave me hanging with the last line being "I found Ellie" UGH

I'm crying so much! Just when I wipe my years away, and think I can make it - the next chapter makes me cry. Nick's last letter made me cry even more! TT-TT

I really liked the picnic scene. :) They really are quite similar, ya know?

Wow! I have absolutely fallen in love with this story. I hope that you update soon!

Hmm, I feel like you wrote this in a rush. Don't get me wrong, the contents are amazing and I'm really happy that you finally updated but I'm sort of disappointed in you. I see so many spelling and grammar mistakes littering this chapter, I was ready to tear my hair out. I'm a grammar nazi and having them there without being able to do anything was literally killing me. And a quick question, if Nick was born with cystic fibrosis, wouldn't he not be able to reproduce? Doesn't cystic fibrosis damage all of the other organs including whether or not a person is able to have children? I'm sure I read that somewhere. Unless you're basing this story on a loose cystic fibrosis case and not the denotation one.

Brilliant- just check your spellings :)

So glad you're back! I had to read this fic over again to refresh my memory. Just like the first time, I cried, well teared. I was wondering when Nick was going to appear again. And I'm glad that Mandy wants to find Ellie, I was hoping you'd have that happen. Now I just hope it won't be a problem. Can't wait for your next post! Soon I hope!

What? Aperfect nightmare? I'm glad he was there.

This is just heavenly. ah

I'm noticing a pattern here, I feel like most of your stories start off with a sad tinge. No? Watch Over My Life, she was dying, albeit it was a happy ending. Here, Nick died in the beginning, although I'm pretty sure it will have a happy ending. But hey, amazing story! I can't wait for your next update.

this story is amazing and im very glad u have started to edit it again

I just read the first chapter but this is so beautiful! Wel-written, and it sucked me in completely. I am going to cry throughout this whole thing! I just want to you know that I really love this. It's hard to find good authors now but this is genuine, you have to finish it if you haven't! xoxo-butterflyflower

just found your story and I love it. basically couldn't stop crying for like the first 15 chaps. keep updating

grr, I knew this was going to happen and you still made me cry! I love how real life this story feels, I feel like my boyfriend just died or something. Anyway, great job!