Reviews for Deal with the Devil
skyemarie chapter 1 . 2/19
I have spent so so so long trying to find this story again, it disappeared from AO3 a while back and for years I couldn't remember the title only that the girl was called Zoe, which as you can imagine didn't make it easy looking. I finally remembered the title and oh my god, I have no other way to find you but I hope one day you come back to writing because this story literally shaped my formative years and you are an INCREDIBLE writer and creator of this entire universe with characters that felt like real living people to me. I AM SO EXCITED TO READ THIS AGAIN YOU HAVE NO IDEA
kjm92 chapter 7 . 5/18/2021
Ooh, now who's this? Whoever he is, looks like Zoe is gonna be in trouble. It feels weird to think demons having a thing about nun, considering i always envision nuns as being old women lol.
kjm92 chapter 6 . 5/18/2021
Ooh well this is intriging... for the first time in the story she doesn't feel completely powerless. You can see some hope. As much as I hope Zoe succeeds, I also can't help but feel like this story has now just become a ticking time bomb... counting down till the moment when HE finds out she is plotting against him.
kjm92 chapter 5 . 5/18/2021
Dun dun duh! Omg this is the most exciting bit yet! I'm mainly routing for the angels, and yet at the same time, a part of me is on the demon guy's side! Though I know I shouldn't be, I can't help but be endeared to him a little.

I hate that he is visiting Shannon. I feel like after what he's putting poor Zoe through, the least he can do is stay away from her cousin!
kjm92 chapter 4 . 5/18/2021
Wow, after the last mission i am shocked this one was so easy. Comparatively anyway. Well, at least he saved her, I can't help but like him a little more now he has done that!
kjm92 chapter 3 . 5/17/2021
YES! She's awake! Finally, something good happens to Zoe. I feel like she deserves it as this point.

As for the mission he gave her... I would absolutely kill him. I mean I know you couldn't, but you know what I mean lol. I would kill him! That chapter was so scary, like a scene from a horror movie, but amazingly written! I worry now that all her missions are slowly going to get worse and worse!
kjm92 chapter 2 . 5/17/2021
Oh, If I were her, once I had reached the point where I realised all of this was real, I would have to ask this guy a million questions. Mind you, he probably wouldn't answer them. Being given mysterious vague answer like : "more than you might think" would drive me mad! lol.

I was surprised by how excited and 'in the moment' i got when when Zoe was in that church. I felt like my heart was pounding right along with hers. In a weird way, i feel proud of her for managing to do it. But like Zoe, I know its kinda wrong to feel that way lol. But if you thought it was going to save someone you love, you would simply have to do it, wouldn't you?
kjm92 chapter 1 . 5/17/2021
I love the look of this story, just from the first chapter! It is an intriguing beginning! Between hearing about her having lost her parents, and someone she is so close to Zoe. I already am routing for her, hoping that she will be ok. She is also clearly brave, and knows her own mind. She doesn't suffer fools gladly, so I can tell I'm going to enjoy seeing how she deals with this demon guy.

He sounds hot but terrifying. A deadly, yet interesting quality!

If you were her, you would think you were having a nightmare surely? Or hallucinating.

Can't wait to read next chapter.
Sarah louis chapter 19 . 3/16/2019
This is the best story i have read ...just love it
Guest chapter 34 . 1/1/2019
Gosh, I just finished after a two-day binge read, and all I want is more. Despite English not being your primary language, you've conveyed all the sadistic desire, the pain, the emotion wonderfully. I suppose even language barriers can't hold back the skill of a true writer. Now, I do have to say, after those last few paragraphs in the final chapter, with Abbadon having become so excited at the prospect of Zoe punishing him, the punisher, the open ending left me with several interesting ideas. Perhaps when Abbadon visits her again, she'll have realized how much she missed the sadistic bastard and (with some prodding on Abbadon's part) they may enter a semi-consensual Master-slave relationship. However, what if, at some point, she turns the tables on him? Takes control and punishes him again, if you know what I mean ;). If you haven't already guessed it, I'd obviously love a sequel, but I expect nothing and already feel extremely lucky to have read what you've shared thus far. Good luck with your writings and studies and I hope you find that metalhead boyfriend you've been searching for. Adío.
Guest chapter 26 . 11/9/2018
Guest chapter 30 . 8/5/2017
I rely enjoyed this story so far this is what demons would do or do worse if they were here with us
Just Thanks for passing the time for me
Vanessa chapter 34 . 7/7/2017
This was an amazing book. I enjoyed it so much, I can't wait to hear that you'll have made a sequel to this. It had me crying, laughing, screaming, gasping, I was obsessed and it was a great book. You're a wonderful author, though there were many misspellings it was great.
Pennie Wagner chapter 34 . 3/19/2017
Oh boy! This was really good. I love/hate (mostly leaning toward STRONG dislike) Abaddon. He's a fucking abusive, self-centered, twisted SOB...
But he's a demon. And, speaking from many years of reading/watching/researching of things of this nature, you did a PHENOMENAL job at making him so. His character is so well-written (for what he is, as a demon). I have to give you many thumbs up for that. I will DEFINITELY be reading the sequel you are working on.
As well, though not as...markedly so amazingly written as Abaddon, Zoe was still quite a good main character. I enjoyed reading this story, by a lot.
Thank you for this story and for all the hard work you put into it (even if I'm crazy late on finding it, lol).
Pennie Wagner chapter 33 . 3/19/2017
Damn that was gross...and sad...Hopefully in the sequel, if Abaddon comes back (let's face it, he HAS to), he realize that humans don't JUST have to b slaves. Like...jesus...
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