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no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 6/28/2009
Wow, these are some incredible lines. Did you realize virtually all of them are in present tense? Or was that intentional? Some of them I just adore and wish I written myself, and I want to steal them and write poems from them. Haha. I think my favorite is "The world is flat and I am a garden." So beautiful. Ah. I want them all. Haha. Nice job. Keep writing! :)