Reviews for In Our Own World |
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xXWhat-is-your-damageXx chapter 8 . 1/9/2011 Aww... that was cute! I wasn't paying enough attention to other stuff so I don't know if you said you were continuing this or not. I hope it's a yes, though, 'cause I think I love your boys. They're so freakin' adorable! |
Crystalynn chapter 6 . 1/9/2011 Aw that's so sweet! :D |
Crystalynn chapter 5 . 1/9/2011 Okay, my experience with child abuse. After a while it starts to feel normal. You just kinda get used to it. Either Dareynn talks about it like he does because he really is used to it or he's "a tough guy" or at least wants to act like one. |
Crystalynn chapter 4 . 1/9/2011 I officially like Dare's pov better! Why, I just can't put my finger on it, but I definitely prefer it. |
Crystalynn chapter 3 . 1/9/2011 What time is it? Anthony is either really lazy or just dead tired. XD Busy day? |
Crystalynn chapter 2 . 1/9/2011 Now THAT's a cliffie! But whatever happened to the Cheezeits and the granola bars and sodas? They never ate them. XD Inconsistency alert! |
Crystalynn chapter 1 . 1/9/2011 You know what this could use? A cliffhanger! Maybe not have dar wake up til chapter two! That's what I'd do with it! ;D |
ExoticErotica chapter 3 . 10/6/2010 20. 60 to go til this story's got as many reviews as it deserves! |
ExoticErotica chapter 2 . 10/6/2010 You don't chat on the forums by any chance do you? Either way you should totally PM me or something! Hit me up! I wanna talk about your stories! :) I've got like a million questions, and anyway, I learned from writing my own stuff that there's nothing better than having someone to talk to who actually knows what its like to write! ESPECIALLY if they write your same genre! Hope you update soon! -xo |
ExoticErotica chapter 1 . 10/6/2010 I HATE stories with significantly fewer reviews than they deserve! So here! Consider this a well-earned "bump!" I hope you continue to write this. It is truly beautiful! |
Crystalynn chapter 8 . 8/31/2010 Hurray! It's about time! :D Oh my gosh, I feel like i haven't read this story in a million years! I actually had to go back and read the last chapter just to get my bearings! I hope the next update will be soon before I completely forget D: Maybe you and I can keep in touch! :) Do you like fantasy? cuz I've got a slash fantasy you might like! It might even give you some new muses! Not only that, but I'll be seeing your reviews and remembering to check back in on Anthony and Dareynn! Ugh. The flu's going around! I hope you manage to dodge it better than I did! XD Take care! Ps. I'll be waiting like a bunny on crack to hear back from you! |
Wildblumen chapter 8 . 8/27/2010 Woho! They did it finally? I can't believe they turned out to be BOTH gay! hahahaha! this fact has added a special taste to your story, honestly! Keep it up, and I'm still looking forward to your updates ) |
bridgettblah chapter 8 . 8/26/2010 *Gasp* Finally! lol I love thems xD |
California Reynolds chapter 8 . 8/26/2010 I really am enjoying this so far. It's very sweet and quietly moving, a perfect example of young love/lust and what happens the first tiem you like someone no matter what sex they are. THis especially rings true to me since I have been in a similar situation. I love this so far. Keep updating! Much love 7 Author props! -Cali |
Wildblumen chapter 7 . 7/29/2010 Finally! a new chapter is up! I swear I was surprised to find the message in my inbox, informing me that this chapter is up. Nice piece as usual, I'll keep waiting for the newest :) |