|Reviews for conjunto roof music|
| Ernest Bloom chapter 1 . 6/27/2009
darn it; my good friend isca's
been here before me!
idk what a harley-caesar strut
is, but there's much here to
recommend you, from the title
to the vocabulary to the
architecture of your lines, to
isca getting here first. maybe
you'll be interesting to follow.
| Isca chapter 1 . 6/27/2009
Aha! This was a delightful piece. There are a lot of Mexican workers in my town, so the line, "Don't let them rape you," was familiar, as many of the young high school girls around here know not to hang around certain places at night. Of course, the workers probably wouldn't do anything, but still, no one really wants to go to the grocery store and get hit on by forty sweaty men haha. The 'carcass' line was my favourite-good imagery! (:
| jAsMiNeLoVeStWiLiGhT chapter 1 . 6/25/2009