Reviews for conjunto roof music
Ernest Bloom chapter 1 . 6/27/2009
darn it; my good friend isca's

been here before me!

idk what a harley-caesar strut

is, but there's much here to

recommend you, from the title

to the vocabulary to the

architecture of your lines, to

isca getting here first. maybe

you'll be interesting to follow.
Isca chapter 1 . 6/27/2009
Aha! This was a delightful piece. There are a lot of Mexican workers in my town, so the line, "Don't let them rape you," was familiar, as many of the young high school girls around here know not to hang around certain places at night. Of course, the workers probably wouldn't do anything, but still, no one really wants to go to the grocery store and get hit on by forty sweaty men haha. The 'carcass' line was my favourite-good imagery! (:
jAsMiNeLoVeStWiLiGhT chapter 1 . 6/25/2009