I'm totally NOT on Jayden's side right now.

I read part of this before, but then I lost it. Found it again so I'm reading all of it. :)

This fic took me days to read. *passes out*

But it's awesome so totally worth it! Please continue... :)

Hi! Just wanted to say that I love the story and the writing and it's probably moved me to tears so many times I don't quite want to count.

The characters have been developed really nicely and I think the details of each of the character's personalities have been fleshed out so well that it's really to empathise with them. Sometimes I feel that the emotional ups and downs and the decisions made could have been paced better but overall I really love this story. )

Hey! I know this hasn't been updated in a long while, but I hope you can update soon. Until then, I'm putting it on Alert!

Thanks for writing!

Hello, I love this great story but there is no news for a while now. Do you intend to continue or is this the end of Devin Jayden? Thanks!

i'm loving this story-i read whenever i could for four days! i hope you do finish this someday

I liked this story, and all the detail in it. It was edited and written really well, which is always a in my book.

The only beef I have is that you don't have some sort of indicator that you are switching scenes. Most of the time, people use a *** or a -, which lets the reader know that you are switching to another person's point of view. It's a bit confusing without it (I keep having to remind myself that Chris is not with Devin, and that they are in different rooms and conversations, for example.)

Other than that, awesome story!

I absolutely love your writing. The characters are wonderful and I thoroughly enjoyed reading this story this past couple days, made an account just so I can comment :D

Its nice to read a story that is so detailed, I can tell you love your characters and I like that you don't rush things like so many others. It was so nice to read something that wasn't someones life story crammed into one chapter!

Thank you for writing, hope you get back into it again and I will keep my eye on your stuff and read even more, your my favorite author here!

thought of something. When Adam and chris has sexy butt secks (xD can't believe i said that) didn't Adam notice his scars? I was waiting for Adam to comment about them when he asked chris to take his shirt off.

The story is intriguing, I like the plot and especially the world you are creating here, - interesting and doesn't seem like the same old fantasy AU. Good job.

I like Devin and Chris.

What I don't like as much -

Sarah - you are being self indulgent here. The Bossy - weird - crazy females annoy the hell out of me. Sorry. You are not the first one who is doing this type of character and I personally don't find them cool. Yours is not the most annoying I have seen though... She's almost not annoying. Still, the story would benefit from a more complex character.

Complaint no2 - I sometimes get tired of the relationship talk - who is treating whom which way, reacting to whom which way, why... it's like they are constantly sorting it out. Blah, blah... I find myself wishing I could make a short cut. It's hard to explain, but I have this feeling that you could just sum up some paragraphs in one. Keep it shorter and more simple or something.

:)

WOW! I cant even begin to describe how amazing this story is. I adore it. Please please please please update soon :D xx

So... this has been abandoned? Too bad. I would review every chapter, but I don't have time... so I'll just say I really, really like this. It's the only well-written story worth reading on here.

I have to agree with Unknown By All on that. I just love this story. Best one I've read so far. After reading it for about a week I'm hooked. I can really tell you took a lot of time to develop the plot and add little facts and hints here and there. I'm just really glad I gave this story a try because I usually don't like mpregs mostly because the authors don't have a clue how to make a male pregnancy seem real but you've done a fabulous job in describing how a male pregnacy works in Aurora. I can't wait until Chris' babes are born and Devin's for that matter. I also can't wait to find out who this Mason character is. Now I can see you haven't updated in quite a while and I'm sure you have a busy life for not doing so but I encourage you to please please please try to update soon as possibly possible.

UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE NOW! please? with a smexy jayden on top? or adam, hell even victor, if you like him (which i dont, nice job on killing him off, he deserved it, at least hes in peace now) its been so long since youve updated and really, i honestly must read more! its an amazing story, one of my favorites, i must have more! please? i need to see that happily ever after! with the wittle babies! and and and the smexy couples! please?