|Reviews for Hug|
| Isca chapter 1 . 7/1/2009
"It's a strain to hold it all." That's sad. The burning passion of this person's love is clearly dying off. The poem flowed and rhymed easily. The simplicity of this piece only enhanced the angst. Keep up the good work. :)
| Eternal Skies chapter 1 . 6/30/2009
again, this is pretty realistic..
there was this sentence, it didn't sound right:
When people asked, “What’s wrong?” I shrugged,
(it isn't that wrong but the present tense sounds better, dk. I know it's just 4 the rhyming :P)
| thebeautyoftruth chapter 1 . 6/26/2009
really good, I liked the feeling it evokes.