Reviews for Room 475
Sarah chapter 30 . 12/22/2010
So I love this story, it is so well done and it makes me cry a bit but it's beautiful

All I want for christmas is an update!
irresistiblealbino chapter 30 . 12/20/2010
I am on the verge of tears. Oh my gosh. I just can't take the sadness.

One question: did you ever say what disease was actually killing her? I can't quite recall.



P.S. You reviewed my story way back when and I am in some major need of an idea or two on how to continue it. Any suggestions would be much appreciated :)
GiraffesKat chapter 30 . 12/19/2010
She's going to die... and I'm going to hate this
Please chapter 30 . 12/18/2010
Faceless Nomad chapter 30 . 12/6/2010
Oh me, oh my you have out done yourself... This is amazing! I love this story and you write it so well! I can't wait to see what happens next!

Ps: Glade to see an update!
tiamat100 chapter 30 . 12/4/2010
I just found this story today, and I'm reviewing to tell you that it is one of the most heartbreaking and beautiful things which I have ever read.

I love Becka's character and how she was reconciled with her family through her illness, I love how Bernie became her friend through that one strange encounter, and I loved how you showed her being cut in half.

One of the saddest moments for me was when Bernie put Becka's photo with the photo of his sister. It was such a brief moment but it was really heartbreaking.

I probably sound really false and considered, writing this, but I'm hoping that it's obvious that I really do think that you've written a brilliant story, and that I'm really desperate to see more.

I would love to see more of Brooke. I really liked how she was the one to really tell Becka off for lying and I really like her character.

This story is just so well-written- I've sat here and read the entire thing from beginning to end and I still want to read more. The characters are believeable and funny because they are so real. Even reading this and knowing it will end in Becka dying, I'm hoping that she will recover, because I love the characters and will feel truly sad at the end of the story.

I'm not good at giving tips for improvement, particurlarly when I love a story, so I'll not do that. I would like to say that I admire anyone who can write as well as you can. And I only got this FictionPress account today so that I could review your story properly.

...Yeah. Please write more soon?
TakeMyHandHoldItTight chapter 30 . 12/3/2010
Such a sad chapter :( I love Jonah for always being there for Becka though :)
Grenna-Chae chapter 30 . 12/3/2010
Uh. Maze. Ing.

To say the least. :)

I liked this chapter a lot because of all the emotional stuff. Especially with the comic relief of the previous chapter.

And I can deal with that many more chapters.

Great job.

AlreadyGone chapter 30 . 12/3/2010
Ooh, so good and so sad!


My dear Kayla, I can't believe this is almost over. It will just make the crying worse! :'(

I like your ending with the 'Screw you. That's all.'

Very nice and I can't wait!

This is heartbreaking how she feels so confused and everything so I can't expect her to get over this. Aww, so sad :(

Update soon, my dear!
Hamburgers and cheese muffins chapter 30 . 12/3/2010
Hey sis! This story is the best one I have read yet! I am telling you that you need to publish this story! When are you going to take that into consideration? YOU CAN'T KILL HER KAYLA! I love this whole book, but you should have her get like a kidney transplant so she doesn't die of renal failure or whatever. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE! ! Luv ya! -Riah.
11xNanx11 chapter 30 . 12/3/2010
Oh my french fires this story is good. I think I'm going to cry when she dies
Dominique chapter 2 . 12/3/2010
This was even batter love it
AmandaHold chapter 30 . 12/3/2010
oh, my. it's almost done. and she's dying. i know, that's really obvious but it's just hard to fathom that the main character is dying. it'll be interesting to see how you end it. i can see Becka's family kind of "adopting" Bernie and Jonah. and Jonah taking all her journals and publishing them into a book. i can also see Jonah going through a tough time where he wants to kill himself again but i think he'd get through it.
Aderyn Azula chapter 30 . 12/3/2010
great as always, though it keeps getting sadder. I can't wait to see how it ends, i guess there really isn't much left, which is sad, but makes sense.

hopefully you'll keep updating regularly :)
HoneyAppleEater chapter 30 . 12/3/2010
I think I am actually in love with this story.

It is so amazingly sad and just amazing.

I can't wait to see how it ends, please update soon :)

xox Emily
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