|Reviews for Room 475|
| HoneyAppleEater chapter 28 . 7/31/2010
Oh. My. Freaking. God.
I dont even have anything to say about this chapter because I love this story so much. Haha I love the limo driver he's so cool.
I really dont want Becks to die D: but I guess she has to? I wish it didnt have to happen though but I can't wait to see where shes taken Bernie :]
Update son xox
| the one and only lenny chapter 28 . 7/30/2010
Babe! i honestly really really like this story. im soo happy and proud of u. theirs only been like one chapter that was a little slow but other then that i enjoyed the whole thing start to finish. im not big on reading unless the book is good and can keep my attention, which this definitely did. i miss u soo much and thought it very funny when u would use names of people that we know. for some reason made me very happy lol beck kinda reminds me of u babe, strong, amazing, caring, and has good friends that love her lots.
| irresistiblealbino chapter 27 . 7/29/2010
I just cried like a baby. What Jonah said was so absolutely precious. I can't believe she is dying. Well we all sort of knew from the beginning that she was dying but that the death is so close to now, is really sad. I have loved this story from the first word so keep up the good work :)
| Teva'ni-Britagne chapter 28 . 7/29/2010
I would've reviewed sooner however I've been so busy with life: college preparations, doctor visits, and preparations for a cruise, that I simply lacked the time. This is fabulous: impeccable writing, consistency with characterization, and believable dialogue, it's all here. These are shining staples of your work. I already adore Jonah and Becka oh so much, but reading over how she lied to Brooke about the severity of her condition broke my heart a bit. A part of me could empathize with why she needed to hide it, why she still couldn't grasp the reality of her death, that it was all very real, and that lying to a little thirteen year old girl wasn't going to help.
A reviewer mentioned in their review that Jonah's confession to her seemed unbelievable. I respectfully disagree with that, I must say. There are many kinds of boys-men in the world essentially, sensitive ones, insensitive ones, laidback ones, and likewise very open and amiable ones. Jonah is a sensitive guy, some guys really would openly confess to their dying loved one. They would realize that renal failure and a brain tumor is stealing precious moments away from what they have so they would try to salvage that by getting everything they might have pent up in the open now. That's possible. So yeah, I felt that particular part was believable.
I love Bernie and his "oh my gosh Babe" sort of concern for her. He's such a breath of fresh air.
Also I want to thank you again, unless I haven't already, for reviewing my story; reading this again really enabled med to dig myself out of the plot bunny rut. That story I penned, needs to be finished, so thank you. _
P.S. Keep writing, you're brilliant at it.
| diana chapter 28 . 7/27/2010
ups sorry haha, it was heart-warming-ly :)
| xXxMidnight-BluexXx chapter 28 . 7/27/2010
Hm maybe she can publish her list? XD
i hope she can complete it anyway T.T
| missfabulousity chapter 28 . 7/27/2010
Another amazing chapter,
well done. :D
| diana chapter 28 . 7/26/2010
oh my god... i've laughed and cryed so hard at this story... it's just... so amazing.
so heartwormingly, heartbreakingly amazing.
GOD this is so hard to read... and at the same time, so so much for writing it. even if it breaks my heart when it ends, i can't wait for more :)
i don't know what else to say. just...
keep writing and i'll take it and deal with it it until is time to say goodbye :)
| HystericalLaughter chapter 28 . 7/26/2010
Im too lazy to log in so from HystericalLaughter.
I want her to live and love a lot longer. .
| Happy reader chapter 28 . 7/26/2010
Oh! I can't wait this is really cute, though I'm going to cry when beca dies :( cuz I like her alot and poor Jonah *sigh* good work! I love it!
| KillMeForever chapter 28 . 7/26/2010
Naww it's so sad, but I love the humour that you keep injecting. If this was completely serious I doubt I'd be reading.
I'm glad that Becka is trying to finish her list! If it were me, I'd have given up by now lol
Not much to say, except no, you weren't the only one, and I guess this is nearing the end now :(
Luffs lea xx
| Kurisuten chapter 28 . 7/25/2010
The conversation that Becka and Jonah has is very intense. I heart it
| melanie27 chapter 28 . 7/25/2010
I loved the ending of this chapter...super funny! I was literally dying of laughter picturing Becka driving. As always, another superb chapter!
| Artume chapter 28 . 7/25/2010
Becka rocks. LOL. Lovely mental image there. Purple hair, oxygen tank strapped on, driving a limo jerkily. Sad, but wow. Loved this update!
Jonah's speech...I felt it to be a bit unnatural. In the sense, I didn't think he would, in reality, say something like that. I mean, guys aren't that forthcoming about their feelings anyway, and Jonah was too honest. I can't say I know a lot about that, but that was just my two cents!
| Grenna-Chae chapter 28 . 7/24/2010
Okay, so where I live, it's about midnight. I was at my mom's party, and am very tired. But I had to review.
Basically, it was okay. Not great. But that's only because this seems kinda like a building chapter, and not a climax chapter. Next chapter will give me answers, hopefully?