| Reviews for Room 475 |
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  safteyscissors chapter 4 . 6/29/2009 Ahh! I'm so excited! I wish I had a seventh of your creativity! alright down to business(again) I didn't see any misspelled words, and the punctuation was good. At first I didn't like your format, but now It's, like, growing on me! lol. Thanks for a wonderful chappie, Darlin'! -99- |
 DELETED20 chapter 3 . 6/29/2009 OMG that was so awesome,and heartbreaking. I look forward to reading more. |
| Coley chapter 3 . 6/28/2009 You and you're cuz are writing this for hopeless romantics like me huh? I love it by the way! Luv ya! |
| safteyscissors chapter 3 . 6/28/2009 Aww! that was so sweet! Well wasn't really paying attenion to spelling and such so you'll have to count on some other chap. :P I am waiting with bated breath for the next tid bit. loves darlin'! |
| safteyscissors chapter 2 . 6/28/2009 Whoops didn't mean a few just one. :D I love it! |
| safteyscissors chapter 2 . 6/28/2009 Alright! that rocked! I want a jonah of my very own! lol. So down to business. Your spelling was indeed flawless. However there were two punctuation misfires. When the Shrink lady says "If I was just a normal person on the street..." you have forgotten the quotation marks at the very beginng. |
| safteyscissors chapter 1 . 6/28/2009 Hey! So ya guess how long it took me to realize that the regular and bold print indicated two separate point of views! Ya like 5 minutes! lol. I think it's awesome and I wish i'd come up with it! lol. Keep it up darlin'! |
| AlreadyGone chapter 3 . 6/28/2009 Really, really good! I did notice one thing though: You only have it in maybe three or four times about her OCD possesed actions. If you want to make it so that Jonah is helping her with that, you should keep it in there but maybe gradually take away some of the obsession. That's all though so good job! I love both characters, they have such unique personalities and because they are not like any characters in other stories. They're unique and extremely special ] Update soon! -Grace |
| Grenna-Chae chapter 3 . 6/28/2009 loved it! I waited until I had read it all before reviewing. It's really adorable! I'm curious about both of them now, and I'm looking forward to the next chapter! *hugs* ~Mary |
| Jaden Ink chapter 3 . 6/27/2009 gah! but i wan to know their issues! |
| Jaden Ink chapter 2 . 6/27/2009 “Room service?” Jonah called into the crackly intercom. “Jonah, we've told you before that this is for emergencies only,” came a friendly voice. She gently reprimanded him, and Jonah pouted. “Just one more time? I have a special guest,” i laughed imagining him lol i could picture that whole part... it's weird i can't picture the girl, it's like i'm her.. which is creepy witht the ocd thing... but the kind of disturbed love is really like...getting to me... all cute and mushy... but i really want to know both their secrets! |
| Jaden Ink chapter 1 . 6/27/2009 interesting... i love her ocd thing i was confused at the begingin when ou were hopping between POV but then i understood what was going on and i thought it was a neat way to do things |
| XxCaptainKoalaxX chapter 2 . 6/27/2009 Nice Story.,...CAn't wait till u update! D |
| AlreadyGone chapter 2 . 6/26/2009 This is so cute! It's funny too in it's own way and I hope you update soon! You're so talented! ] Update soon! -Grace |
| AlreadyGone chapter 1 . 6/26/2009 I like this and I'm sure it's going to be really good and interesting, I can't wait to read more; it'll be good, I can tell ] -Grace |