Reviews for she took my place
young and the reckless chapter 1 . 6/27/2009
i love the audacity of the author's note.

because it's quite a contradiction to the piece itself.

:)
Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 6/26/2009
I like the parallel in the first two verses.

As for the rest of the piece I wasn't too impressed, the last rhyme felt forced and unnatural. Keep up the good work.

Much love,

Juliet.