|Reviews for she took my place|
| young and the reckless chapter 1 . 6/27/2009
i love the audacity of the author's note.
because it's quite a contradiction to the piece itself.
| Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 6/26/2009
I like the parallel in the first two verses.
As for the rest of the piece I wasn't too impressed, the last rhyme felt forced and unnatural. Keep up the good work.