I love this. It's awesome the way it flows, and the message is so very true.

I like the repetition. The idea of gray people walking around, an entirely different population altogether, is an interesting image.

I think gray people have a good character trait-indifference to criticism. At least, in one way it's a good thing. We should be who we want to be.

It's when we ignore people telling us we're making a mistake that it's a problem. Just my two cents there.

It's a cool concept-you could do a lot with this, I'm sure.