|Reviews for Reflection|
| thinking.about.thinking chapter 1 . 12/15/2009
"You can only lose what you gain."
So very true.
| andsherose chapter 1 . 12/14/2009
Aw, Sophie, this is beautiful!
I wanna know where the question ends, though. I feel like there's a line missing, maybe somewhere between
Where new friends warm a heart so cold
Find love you'll find pain.
I love it, though! Poignant and sweet.
| Venz0r chapter 1 . 6/29/2009
I think this is probably the biggest issue with getting close to anyone. We all think about it at one point or another, this poem addresses the issue pretty clearly.
I think the word "Until" stuck out because it doesn't seem to lead anywhere. I could understand "Under", but it doesn't seem to lead anywhere in the poem to me. I see them coming from hills and valleys old, but the laughter isn't doing anything.
Maybe I'm over-thinking. But this is pretty good for the topic it brings up. Definitely meaningful.