|Reviews for Maybe|
| asianinvasion0530 chapter 22 . 2/13/2010
I want a boy who has all those things too. But yeah they're hard to find. /
I didn't even know there was such a thing as a Peter Pan complex haha. But now I know.
But anyways, I don't mind the "Bryant overload" as you called it because I'm glad you're developing their relationship more. ]
| Cinnia Aine chapter 22 . 2/13/2010
Hey, don't worry if Bryant sounds a little bit cliché in this chapter. It's alright to give him positive support like this. At least their relationship is building. I've read some of sophiesix and Tawny Owl's writing. It is very good. I'll be sure to check out Narq's writing. Thanks for the suggestion. (Confession: This is the only online Romance novel that I'm reading at the moment. I'm getting lost in Research Realm at the moment and currently trying to cut myself from the fanfiction world. That reminds me... I really need to write that stupid fanfiction chapter of mine. It's holding me back from my other writing.) Have fun with the future chapters!
| So very poorly planned chapter 22 . 2/13/2010
This was a great chapter. There were parts that I wish I could just copy and paste into my life and be done with it. I particularly liked the part about what kind of boy she would like. It was basically exactly what I would like to say, although I don't exactly know how to put it. I love your writing style, great job. :)
One quick thing though. Could you pretty please try to distinguish between when Bryant is talking to "Delilah" as opposed to Ella? I got kind of confused in this chapter...
Other than that, I can definitely see that the two are getting to know each other and I didn't even realize that her other friends hadn't been mentioned in a while until you said it. I think a few more chapters like this are just fine. :) Update soon, please!
| youwillneverguess chapter 21 . 2/13/2010
another great two chapters.
i've been gone awhile too, holidays get like that.
i kind of fell out of the habit of coming on here, but i'm glad to be reading these stories again.
i really hope you keep writing Maybe! it's really an amazing story and it would suck so much if you stopped. i know that sometimes you can't get around writer's block, but i hope it helps to say that you have heaps of fans who love reading it.
| MiScHiEvOuS sMiLeS chapter 21 . 2/12/2010
aw i still believe in you -! i love the style you use to write and i really think you should continue. that would just make my day XD
| Star Dot Storm chapter 21 . 2/11/2010
Yay! I'm so happy you were nominated! I've heard of SkoW, and I think you have a great chance of winning, and I hope you do win! Ah, many exclamation points. And I'm glad that you remembered Maybe, haha, because I love this story. )
And the description here at the end, I'm not kidding you, more than half of these sound like me friend, Malcolm! I'm so showing his this!
Keep up the writing, and best of luck in the contest!
| sophiesix chapter 21 . 2/11/2010
oh oh OH i love his voice MAN I love his voice. exciting for the SKOW! (and you have ten trillion people out there who believe in you and simply adore your writing so don't you forget it. truly it transports you somewhere else and makes you floaty ;) by you, i mean me, of course. fingers crossed for the SKOW, but either way, you're AWESOME
| Narq chapter 21 . 2/10/2010
Heya! going to go vote for you right now!
I understand what you mean there, and it doesn't feel cliche, 'coz it happened to me with Winata, too! So hang in there, and don't worry if thinking about your story takes a long time, because sometimes a good story does that to you, and sometimes time is what you need to fermet a wonderful novel.
| asianinvasion0530 chapter 21 . 2/10/2010
Aw congratulations! You totally deserved the nomination. ]
Anyways, sounds like a great chapter to look forward to!
| barelyamiable chapter 21 . 2/9/2010
:) I don't believe voting has started quite yet, but I will definitely vote for you when the time comes, hehe.
Ahh, explanation of the highway. I do love symbolism.
Really, I'm in awe of your ability to put words in just the right order. Your writing reminds me of e.e. cummings's poetry. :)
| natmarie chapter 21 . 2/9/2010
CONGRATS! You totally got my vote. The bit in the snippet about "thinks yourself shy" confuses me...think himself shy, I think myself shy?
Love it though. The bit about Hallelujah is my favorie. I love that song even thought it's kind of depressing. Hope all is well with you. My life is hitting a rough patch. If you get bored love to hear what you think of my latest piece which is kind of a jab at facebook and new style for me. If not that's ok too.
| shutterbaby chapter 21 . 2/9/2010
Congrats! (I'm K.B, the judge for Best Breakout Author over on SKoW.) Keep up the good writing.
| Cinnia Aine chapter 21 . 2/9/2010
Well, don't feel forced to write Maybe. I know how that feeling is and it's not pleasant. Congrats on the nomination! Once I get off my slacking and wrap up my things on and the fandom websites, I'll stop haunting this website and actually find out what SKOW is all about. You should totally get far in it, though. For a new writer (well, not so new, but this is your first fiction press novel) you write very well. I like the snippets. And the high way explanation. My understanding of Ella and Bryant is growing. :)
Good luck with whatever you do, writing offline or online!
~ Cinnia Aine ~
| Shy Smile chapter 21 . 2/9/2010
I loved the little chapter :) I love how your writing always seems so poetic.
There are awards on here? 0_o How do you vote? How do you nominate? I definitely want to vote for you, but I'm not sure how!
| Hellcat81 chapter 1 . 2/9/2010
nice beginning. liked the way how the girl actually just wrote this for an online archive. just like you are doing with this fic. maybe you are posting your own experiences... :D
love at first sight? if i take it word for word then no, i don't believe in love at first sight. BUT i do believe that sth. like an instant attraction to someone exists. you know when you hit it off with someone right away or like you are on the same wave length... but instant love? no. i don't think so. love is too complex. love develops. it takes time and many "ingredients" to sustain that love.