|Reviews for Maybe|
| SarcasmIsPoetry chapter 1 . 6/29/2009
Yes, I believe in love at first sight.
Anyways. Thank you for appreciating my work. (That seldom happens, you know.) I'm glad that you enjoyed my poem, though I'm sorry that you felt the same way as me. But I don't feel that anymore now, because I've moved on. The boy I liked..we talked through YM Messenger. He told me that he knew all along. It really hurt at first. But then I realized that no matter how many poems I write for him, he will never love me back. I already accepted that fact. And he has a girlfriend now too. I still watch him in the corner of my eye, but I'm sure I don't like him anymore.
Now, it's a lesson for me that love at first sight is like your first impression. If what you think about him was right, then it will last. But if he's totally different from what you think he is when you first saw him, then your feelings for him will change in time.
Sorry to ramble. I hope we can be friends. :D
PS: Can I have your YM? Or email or anything..
| circusbird chapter 1 . 6/29/2009
I didn't really understand what the story was really about, but I think more chapters, character development (even though I love your characters already), dialogue and such can create this little cute story into something really worth reading.
Is this supposed to be about you? If it is, then I think you've conveyed what you (or this girl and boy) are feeling. It was cute, I enjoyed it and if my understanding of this story is correct then I can relate to it.
This story is like when this certain guy briefly brushes against me or looks at me there's this cliche jolt that runs through my body, but I'm too much of a realist to believe that it actually happened to the both of us and scoff at my lovesick girlyness.
No, I don't believe in love at first sight. I'm a realist. I mean, how can someone love another with just one glance? They know nothing of each other. It's just physical attraction, isn't it?
But that's just my opinion. I'd love to hear yours.
| Kayla-Renee chapter 1 . 6/28/2009
Well hi there :)
You have a great writing style
Personally i do believe in love at first sight :)
| effervescent-sentiments chapter 1 . 6/28/2009
Your imagery is absolutely amazing; I'd like to see it as less exposition and more story, more character, more dialogue, but I understand that can be hard, I do. I'm not entirely sure what you meant by any of it, by writing it, then by telling us that you wrote it (in the story), but I hope that it continues.
As for knowing whether I believe in love at first sight, I might suggest checking out J. Wood and R. Ashman's collaboration (between hollyisfainting and myself). If you're curious, the next chapter that comes out describes just that.
Or, if you don't feel like reading, I could just PM you what I said about love. Because I think it's a point worth hearing. ;)